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Quote megablast2 Replybullet Topic: game in space
    Posted: 01 March 2013 at 5:37am
hello :),

This is the first graphic for a zleda-like game in the space:). What do you think it?





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Quote crozier Replybullet Posted: 01 March 2013 at 2:44pm
What do I think? Well the outline on the monsters/lazer light don't look that good. There is some pillowshading on the door. A few of the colors are drab looking, the hues and saturation just feel a little odd (ie whatever that purple thing is in the corner, and the lazer). Is this top-down or 3/4 view? The doors really throw off the perspective.
Oh and some floor tiles would be really nice.
Loving the box and the red button btw.
And welcome to pixeljoint!

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Quote megablast2 Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2013 at 2:29pm
Thanks for your poste :).

For 'The doors really throw off the perspective' you say of  all doors?
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Quote crozier Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2013 at 3:05pm
The leftmost door is ok, but the upper and lower right ones (the ones leaning to the left and right) just feel odd.
Side note the rooms are kind of empty looking.
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Quote megablast2 Replybullet Posted: 12 March 2013 at 9:09am
hello :),

 I'm working the decors.


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Quote DragonMarx Replybullet Posted: 12 March 2013 at 11:44am
I really have to say that the addition of the green really made a difference!
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Quote showtime Replybullet Posted: 12 March 2013 at 11:49am
That's a huge improvement perspective-wise, way less confusing
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Quote megablast2 Replybullet Posted: 26 March 2013 at 7:40am
Hello :),

 This is my wall :






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Quote megablast2 Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2013 at 5:31am
hello :),

The continuation :




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Quote Stevie Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:06pm
I'm just a newbie here myself, but I really like what you have so far. Your style is great and I love the coloring.
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Quote ultimaodin Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:34pm
Looking good - the mapping is still a bit open but that'll come with more assets. It could use more of the space feel.
The world is but a shadow of emotion, cast in shades of grey.
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Quote programgamer Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:44pm
You know what would make it have more of a space athmosphere? First, taller walls with big glass windows to give a feeling of, well, space! Second, you should make everything cluttered with wires and gadgets, make it feel techy and stuff. That's pretty much all I have to say other than good job on this one!
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