Done




Thank you ALL! special thanks
Slym
Fool
mrmo tarius
a3um
frost butt
Jinn
Angel
Night
Elk
ADCRUSHER
 FrostButt
Mille
Jinn16
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Edited by philippejugnet - 13 June 2012 at 2:41pm

u-updated =)

Updated! again!

His tits look way too low, and he doesn't even have a rib cage. o___o

thanks ^^ Trying it out

I don't understand what the poles/banners are connected to. They just look like they're floating behind him.

last update:

Eu arrumei sim se vc não percebeu '-', teria visto se tivesse ao menos se dado o trabalho de abrir um antigo numa nova aba e um novo em outra.

Edited by philippejugnet - 23 May 2012 at 3:48pm

You should work on the scene's setting very soon.

@Christoballs - yeah I know, I will add some mud and the rest of the warriors

@AngelOTG - Thanks I will try to do it

Edited by philippejugnet - 26 May 2012 at 10:47am

Your color choices are kind of boring. It's a very linear green ramp. Throw in some contrasts and purple tints



Edit: Looking at this on my phone, I see my computer screen's brightness must have been off. This is a little toooo contrasted, but it still illustrates my point. :P

Edited by AngelOTG - 27 May 2012 at 2:02am

I feel like you are stuck in a design loop Philippe, where you keep reinterpretting the same step instead of progressing forward. I think Frost had some good advice and you should sketch out the entire piece to see where you are going with it. For the record I actually prefered the previous color scheme.

Much better. Careful about your perspective because in this rough state I can't tell what the creature would be standing on. I hope you are able to incorporate those flags somehow because they added to the piece.

Ae phlipppe, esse ultimo wip, esta uma ma...ra...vi...lhaaaa

Edited by philippejugnet - 28 May 2012 at 4:30am

I just want to say again that I admire how much you've stuck with this and tried your very best and taking all criticisms into account and continuing to appreciate them instead of getting frustrated.  I think you have insane potential at pixel art, but you are already great.  As for a few crits on the last edit regardless of if you're done:

Those thigh plates still look really wonky.  The right leg ones look slightly better, but not much.  Think about it.  If you had armor that wrapped around your thigh in a triangular shape instead of encircling your thigh, it'd be extremely motion limiting and painful.  Also, there doesn't seem to be anything clamping them on there.  I think the piece is also really hindered by not including the feet and showing what it is standing on, it's a really awkward place to cut the piece off, and I sort of have doubts about whether this is to hide that maybe the perspective of the dragon is slightly off from the background.  Lastly, the piece doesn't really seem to have any purpose in itself.  You show a dragon glaring at something carrying a large sword and armor, but you don't really see why, or anything to give the piece contextual purpose.  You just focused on making your piece look really cool, which it does.

Anyway, job well done and I look forward to seeing you continue to progress.

amazing work philippejugnet 

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I think his legs should be spread out more like with the first picture. He looks as if he is squatting very awkwardly.

True, true. Updated. Changed the colors to give more contrast to the fire.



Edited by philippejugnet - 31 May 2012 at 9:56am

Maybe make him look at the same direction as the battle line (if that's the battle line on the left side)?

NOOO =) thats not the concept. The concept is the war between China and Japan.

According to the chinese culture a dragon represents the energy of fire, which destroys but allows the birth of the new. The main concept is, Dragons ( chinese ) going to the rising sun ( japan is called the land of the rising sun) thats the concept ^^. Well, we all know that after the war finished both japan and china had a growth ( the birth of the new ). And Japan won ( energy of fire, which destroys ). This dragon is just guiding them there, "go all of you! faster blablabla!!!"

but yeah, thanks =) all of you!






Edited by philippejugnet - 01 June 2012 at 8:08am