Pixel Joint Forum: [WIP]Weekly challenge: Food stamp! Arepa...

Message

C&C in everything.. i know it looks like some1s stlye that i don't remember i personally liek it, but i don't like the botttom part 

for the ones that don't know: Arepa: Typicall venezuelan food, look it at google..

Pd: yay!: midshipman ^^

Edited by Kfuchoin - 14 May 2007 at 4:48pm

Author	Message
Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Topic: [WIP]Weekly challenge: Food stamp! Arepa... Posted: 14 May 2007 at 4:48pm
	C&C in everything.. i know it looks like some1s stlye that i don't remember i personally liek it, but i don't like the botttom part for the ones that don't know: Arepa: Typicall venezuelan food, look it at google.. Pd: yay!: midshipman ^^ Edited by Kfuchoin - 14 May 2007 at 4:48pm
	IP Logged

Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 14 May 2007 at 5:59pm
	Hola! te sugiero que agregues un poco de antialiasing a esas tortillas, ademas de agregar un poco mas a ese fondo vacio. no mucho, la idea es centrarse en la imagen del centro.
	I ate leel's babies
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 14 May 2007 at 6:05pm
	am no es una tortilla.. xDDDDDDDDDDD gracias.. no se como podria ser el fondo .-. no se me ocuree nada xD english so i don't get into trouble: is not a "tortilla" xD thnx and i don't know how the background could be... i don't ahve any idea... but i'll aplly the A.A edit: ithink that the external A.A is too strong =/ it has like a gray outline... Edited by Kfuchoin - 14 May 2007 at 6:18pm
	IP Logged

Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 14 May 2007 at 8:18pm
	Toooooooooooo much AA ;) 1 or 2 AA colours should suffice.

	IP Logged

Dra_chan Commander Joined: 20 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 628	Posted: 15 May 2007 at 1:38am
	Además de lo que ya te dijeron, podrías agregar más comida en medio de la arepa, que por buscarla en google ya me dio hambre, se ve muy rica http://fis.ucalgary.ca/aval/321/arepa4.jpg. En fin, trata de usar mas contraste en los colores, y un poco de rojo del tomate no le vendria mal para darle más vida al dibujo. Un tip: evita darle AA a las líneas de 45 grados, (o sea un pixel en diagonal), solo aplicalo a los que sean dos o más.
	IP Logged

Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 15 May 2007 at 7:47am
	Thanks Dra_chan :D

	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 15 May 2007 at 2:55pm
	ok toncs vuelvo al AA al paso anterior... am se suponia que era jamon no tomate >.< peor ok le pondre mas comida... tehre you ar emy last updated =P more food ^^ Edited by Kfuchoin - 15 May 2007 at 3:35pm
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 17 May 2007 at 3:55pm
	updateeeeee :P plz help.. i need to finish this.. :S added my coutnry flag... and fixed some lines.. plz..>.<
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 6:56am
	Arepa Nº7... there you are a new edit... C&C&Edits are welcome :P Edited by Kfuchoin - 19 May 2007 at 6:57am
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 8:47am
	The arepa itself has some really wierd AA going on. I wonder if the colors are correct, looks gross to me :/ Because its really hard to tell what it is maybe you can add the word 'arepa' to it? Also that shadow stuff on the top of it...I would delete the flag (tacky) and maybe replace the shadowing to the shape of your country? Lastly, the grey BG color is a little boring maybe in its flatness, textures or a whole new color. I may make a tiny edit for you to get you moving, have an arepa in the mean time ;)
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 8:59am
	the shadow on the top: is the burned part o.o ok i'll add the word the background right now is neutral.. i wans't having as a paln using that one.. and plllllllzzzzzzzzz that would be great :D Edit: Added the word Arepa Moved the Arepa to the right.. Erase the flag Edited by Kfuchoin - 19 May 2007 at 9:57am
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 9:54am
	Time for a little talk with you: First and foremost pixelart is a hobby of patience and mental planning. You are eager to learn and are going for quantity as opposed to quality. Every idea has a possibility and your stamp idea is no exception. If you require Ridalin speak with your Doctor. Pixelart like any artform is an integrated visual communication. Your approach is atm isolated items placed near each other and disconnected for the most part. On my edit I used the BG pattern to tie things together. Your transitions are always ignored and only weakens the 'idea'. Idea is 99% of art, imo. I did not spend but 15-20 minutes to completely redraw every single pixel. Since you are not me and you may not use my pixels since they are to show you the possibilties of your idea only. I just know that in the next 24 hours left in challenge you can take 1 hour to rethink your stamp and then allow yourself the other 23 hours to rework you pixel into the best thing you've made so far. remember to use patience and planning. Today I am feeling lazy so I took my free time to edit your stamp but is not something I really like to do. If you ever hope to get help from me again, since you always ask for lots of help from the PJ members. I require to see the right amount of effort on this here pixel you rework in such a manner that I don't even see one of my pixels on it. This means a whole new approach from you and if I make your brain hurt because I took an approach you wish you had come with yourself...you asked for c+c and possible edit ;)
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 10:08am
	now it looks like a hamburguer .-. :P but kinda cool.. i hope some day to make a work like that.. ='( I really don't understand why PJ members don't help me.. =(, i'm always trying my best.. but is hard.. i'm only 14 years old and i got around 6 months making Pixel Art... i know.. about designing ccoz i have 2 years designing at phostoshop and i know that Idea is the biggest part of the art i don't like to steal pixels... so i wont use yours.. i'll make a whole new stamp... i promise that for tommorrow you'll see a good effort from me in my stamp... i'll take my best at this challenge... and i'll take yur edit as a reference...
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 10:13am
	Well I don't know what the f**k an arepa is... when in doubt its always a hamburger...USA, USA!
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 10:25am
	lol look for an Arepa in google xDDDDDD and i know.. i've gone to USA hamburguers everywhere
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 7:05pm
	Jal.. this is for you :D Need ideas for the background.. plz... fixed some fonts problems: fixed more fotn problems and added a background color: Edited by Kfuchoin - 19 May 2007 at 7:22pm
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

Dra_chan Commander Joined: 20 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 628	Posted: 20 May 2007 at 12:30am
	*Originally posted by Kfuchoin* Jal.. this is for you :D Need ideas for the background.. plz... fixed some fonts problems: fixed more fotn problems and added a background color: This one looks better. Couldn't expect less if you are taught by the pixel sensei jalonso! :P You should decide on a background color asap and then AA the edges of the arepa. I think darker background looks better, but in the end is up to you. You can soften the lines in the "burned part", remember that you can use colors you used somewhere to AA some other area. Also the outlines should be darker than the inner color next to it. Edited by Dra_chan - 20 May 2007 at 12:31am
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 20 May 2007 at 7:38am
	Edit: Added background ^^ Aded AA and all the things that Dra-chan told me xD I wish that jalonso teaches me... =/ that all why i've got from him.. =/
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 20 May 2007 at 7:51am
	Sadly, I can't teach artistic abilities, only technical things and tips. The BB pattern is too subtle and hardly noticeable. You could add a plate or something to fill the area better. Silverware, drink or other stuff. The arepa is all lost in such a big place. Out...
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
	IP Logged

Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 20 May 2007 at 8:27am
	ammm didn't liked the idea of adding things... so here it is.-. in the other stamp : size :P
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
	IP Logged

WIP (Work In Progress)
Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : WIP (Work In Progress)