Pixel Joint Forum: {WIP}Sexeh Lady

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Delko
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Topic: {WIP}Sexeh Lady
Posted: 01 December 2010 at 10:46pm

Still very WIP; for a school project. Referenced used

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Delko
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 12:56am

Doin work.

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cure
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 8:30am

no crits so far. it'd be easier to crit if we had the reference though, and easier to edit if it was at 1x
looks great

Edited by cure - 02 December 2010 at 8:30am

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Sai
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 10:28am

The rear end is looking a bit unnatural and her back looks too elongated. Is this woman supposed to be thin/bony or busty/curvy?

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Delko
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 3:33pm

Reference:
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/3692/1290747757735.jpg
NSFW and Large
Im not going for a 1:1 copy, trying to stylize it a bit. The back is definitely too long; im currently working on that. Her butts a lil too small too

Edited by Delko - 02 December 2010 at 3:33pm

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Sippy_Cup
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 4:57pm

i think the left cheek is a little to big, maybe it peaks a little high, even just a pixel.. i cant really find anything that jumps out at me, GREAT work!

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Delko
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 6:27pm

red lines gone finally, still got a lot of touchups and finishing to do. her face is is a lot rounder than in the reference, but I think ill leave it, I sort of like it better.

Edited by Delko - 02 December 2010 at 6:32pm

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jeremy
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 7:38pm

Face is great. The arm, buttcheek and thigh lines are really banded though, try using an unbroken outline :)

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Ambient
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 7:58pm

The hair needs a ton more highlights. Right now it's a bit bland, and absent of contrast or anything really. Her underwear is a lot more transparent in the reference too. Also the strap going around her leg isn't curved enough to show depth in your image. The curve leading to that strap is a bit iffy, too much like a rational graph.
The anti-aliasing on the hair is a bit sketchy at the bends. On the right you only really have 3 slopes, which don't blend together well if you look close. The left is similar, but less noticeable due to the hand at the moment.

Edited by Ambient - 02 December 2010 at 7:59pm

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Delko
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 8:42pm

Think for all the input, its been spot on so far guys.

Current version.

Edited by Delko - 03 December 2010 at 2:03pm

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ellie-is
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Posted: 03 December 2010 at 4:37pm

Lovely work on the skin, don't dig the dithering on the clothes a lot though.

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Delicious
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Posted: 03 December 2010 at 5:14pm

Looks very nice so far! ~~Though I'm not sure about the highlights in the hair since it seems now that she is older (since the hair is to much of a grey shade) than what you intended and thus far more unattractive~~ Nevermind, It looked grey because I was looking at it on the bottom of my laptop which distorted the brightness. You plan on colouring it or leaving it greyscaled?

Edited by Delicious - 03 December 2010 at 5:15pm

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Delko
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Posted: 03 December 2010 at 6:34pm

Nah, its gotta be greyscale; The project calls for me to paint this sucker, pixel by pixel; so the less colors I have to mix the better.

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ChrisButton
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Posted: 03 December 2010 at 8:07pm

You're right she is sexy. My only complaint would be the cut off lines.

Reminds me of that famous sculpture without arms.

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ChrisButton
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Posted: 03 December 2010 at 10:17pm

Oh, and I like the dithering on the clothes - it gives it texture.

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A.B. Lazer
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Posted: 04 December 2010 at 12:53pm

What kind of school project is that?
Looks nice so far.

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Delko
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Posted: 04 December 2010 at 4:21pm

Chuck Close Study

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jeremy
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Posted: 04 December 2010 at 5:15pm

If it's his post-event work, shouldn't you be doing "pixels with outlines"? Here's a couple of pieces which use that.

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Delko
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Posted: 04 December 2010 at 5:56pm

The minimum size is 30x40 with 1 inch squares for pixels, Im not confident enough in my painting abilities to do anything more than solid blocks, and the project only calls for grayscale, so im not going to make it harder on myself than i already have. Plus I dont have all that much time.

Edited by Delko - 04 December 2010 at 6:01pm

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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Topic: {WIP}Sexeh Lady Posted: 01 December 2010 at 10:46pm
	Still very WIP; for a school project. Referenced used
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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 12:56am
	Doin work.
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 8:30am
	no crits so far. it'd be easier to crit if we had the reference though, and easier to edit if it was at 1x looks great Edited by cure - 02 December 2010 at 8:30am
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Sai Seaman Joined: 08 January 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 10:28am
	The rear end is looking a bit unnatural and her back looks too elongated. Is this woman supposed to be thin/bony or busty/curvy?
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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 3:33pm
	Reference: http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/3692/1290747757735.jpg NSFW and Large Im not going for a 1:1 copy, trying to stylize it a bit. The back is definitely too long; im currently working on that. Her butts a lil too small too Edited by Delko - 02 December 2010 at 3:33pm
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Sippy_Cup Midshipman Joined: 10 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 72	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 4:57pm
	i think the left cheek is a little to big, maybe it peaks a little high, even just a pixel.. i cant really find anything that jumps out at me, GREAT work!
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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 6:27pm
	red lines gone finally, still got a lot of touchups and finishing to do. her face is is a lot rounder than in the reference, but I think ill leave it, I sort of like it better. Edited by Delko - 02 December 2010 at 6:32pm
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jeremy Rear Admiral Joined: 25 November 2024 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 1704	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 7:38pm
	Face is great. The arm, buttcheek and thigh lines are really banded though, try using an unbroken outline :)
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Ambient Midshipman Joined: 02 April 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 7:58pm
	The hair needs a ton more highlights. Right now it's a bit bland, and absent of contrast or anything really. Her underwear is a lot more transparent in the reference too. Also the strap going around her leg isn't curved enough to show depth in your image. The curve leading to that strap is a bit iffy, too much like a rational graph. The anti-aliasing on the hair is a bit sketchy at the bends. On the right you only really have 3 slopes, which don't blend together well if you look close. The left is similar, but less noticeable due to the hand at the moment. Edited by Ambient - 02 December 2010 at 7:59pm
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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 02 December 2010 at 8:42pm
	Think for all the input, its been spot on so far guys. Current version. Edited by Delko - 03 December 2010 at 2:03pm
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ellie-is Commander Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 706	Posted: 03 December 2010 at 4:37pm
	Lovely work on the skin, don't dig the dithering on the clothes a lot though.
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Delicious Rear Admiral Joined: 18 January 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 273	Posted: 03 December 2010 at 5:14pm
	Looks very nice so far! ~~Though I'm not sure about the highlights in the hair since it seems now that she is older (since the hair is to much of a grey shade) than what you intended and thus far more unattractive~~ Nevermind, It looked grey because I was looking at it on the bottom of my laptop which distorted the brightness. You plan on colouring it or leaving it greyscaled? Edited by Delicious - 03 December 2010 at 5:15pm
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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 03 December 2010 at 6:34pm
	Nah, its gotta be greyscale; The project calls for me to paint this sucker, pixel by pixel; so the less colors I have to mix the better.
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ChrisButton Commander Joined: 10 September 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 371	Posted: 03 December 2010 at 8:07pm
	You're right she is sexy. My only complaint would be the cut off lines. Reminds me of that famous sculpture without arms.
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ChrisButton Commander Joined: 10 September 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 371	Posted: 03 December 2010 at 10:17pm
	Oh, and I like the dithering on the clothes - it gives it texture.
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A.B. Lazer Commander Joined: 21 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 310	Posted: 04 December 2010 at 12:53pm
	What kind of school project is that? Looks nice so far.
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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 04 December 2010 at 4:21pm
	Chuck Close Study
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jeremy Rear Admiral Joined: 25 November 2024 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 1704	Posted: 04 December 2010 at 5:15pm
	If it's his post-event work, shouldn't you be doing "pixels with outlines"? Here's a couple of pieces which use that.
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Delko Seaman Joined: 12 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 04 December 2010 at 5:56pm
	The minimum size is 30x40 with 1 inch squares for pixels, Im not confident enough in my painting abilities to do anything more than solid blocks, and the project only calls for grayscale, so im not going to make it harder on myself than i already have. Plus I dont have all that much time. Edited by Delko - 04 December 2010 at 6:01pm
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