I think the best way to correct the crooked lines would be to start over on a small canvas first and then worry about the lines after that. Maybe 200-300 pixels wide.

Even if you were to fix the lines in the current size trying to shrink this while keeping the drawing intact would be too hard and take too long, if it can even been done. After it is shrunk you would still have to fix the lines again because of the errors that the shrinking process would create. So making this small should be done first, and then correcting the lines is done second. It's also much easier to make lines straight when they are small.

Edited by onek - 01 June 2011 at 3:12am

Look here what I did, I know it is not good, I tried Changing the size, I think this is small, do not know about you, waiting for your help.

Note: First I want to make a beautiful and nothing crooked lineart and then color, because when we paint can even be more beautiful form does not, I want to perfect this form. Thank you.

with what?
the lineart is not so bad.... go further and we can help u improve..

(i made some suggestions regarding colors and shading in my edit....)

Edited by onek - 02 June 2011 at 5:42am

look, this my fast improvisation:

@ Unhero Do not know, I really liked this issue, someone bothers me, blood is not what I want. The madera I wanted a more refined tone, gray and I think that's kind of heavier, thanks for the time occupied in my name, no more excuse realemnte that's not what I want, worth even more.

Waiting for suggestions.

Quick edit, I added better colors for the blade, the stone in the anti I edited out, more rounded, I added a stone to the blade of one aspect of the eye so it looks kind of a dragon.



Waiting for tips.

Edited by Juniorps - 03 June 2011 at 8:13pm

I think you're headed in the right direction. All you need is a little more research on existing weapons. And probably more information on what you want the weapon to be.

By design weapons are meant to deal damage. And decorations are often added to either enhance their battle-effectiveness or to give an impression of what they're for.

What's the gem for? Does it give an elemental attribute to the weapon? Does it enhance the blade, or the wielder? Is it purely decorative?

Is the blade primarily a slashing weapon or a piercing/stabbing weapon? A piercing weapon would have its center of gravity closer to the axis of the shaft. Having it centered means it's easier to direct your blows. A slashing weapon would benefit from a center of gravity at the opposite side of the blade, as inertia would keep the blade pointed in the direction of your swing. Or it can be placed in the middle so it's easier to twist the weapon.

How is the blade attached to the polearm? Is it forged into a single piece? Is it connected by rivets? Is it tied to it by leather bindings? Are there other clamping mechanisms used?

What is the shaft made of? Will it be thick/strong enough to support the maneuvers you'll do with the weapon? Does it have some degree of flex to it? Remember that thrusting weapons tend to have a straight shaft/arm, while slashing weapons have sweeping curves to help orient the cutting edge.

Currently you have a wavy blade which is meant to deal tearing damage, but your weapon shaft is meant for thrusting, which is a bit confusing.

I hope these questions would help you think of where to go to next.

Edited by rustEdge - 04 June 2011 at 4:48pm

Hope i helped O:?


Edited by Hiuru - 17 June 2011 at 5:54pm

Update blade :



EDIT : This AA is good? I do not know do not have much experience beyond what you would like to criticize the ax in a whole criticize the AA, because I'm not sure you're okay.

I would now like to focus on wood, I'm researching textures that fit any more.

Edited by Juniorps - 23 June 2011 at 5:45pm

Little edit, that shows how to make the blade sharper. ;)

Help me, I need an update, I do not know what to do; l

Editing ... Maybe it's looking like more and more with an ax, or a weapon of the Middle Ages



suggestions?

The rope really tied things together(LOL!), i liked it and think you should keep it. however you should maybe make the top surface abit more narrow the further back it goes:

Use this as a referance only, since I edited quickly with a brush from Windows 7  mspaint, which for some reason has antialiasing so it may have added some colors.



Edited by MacNcheese - 13 July 2011 at 1:11pm