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tuaarita
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Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049 |
   Topic: Disintegrating planetPosted: 20 December 2011 at 6:37am |
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So far..
v2 
v3 
v4 
With some asterism background based on this http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-6POnqulCLbE/TVqUw5X2IlI/AAAAAAAAIDw/vX1h49KupH4/s1600/Otava.jpg v5 
v6 
v6 with a simple frame 
v7 with a better twirly 
v8 
v9 
v10 
v10.5 
v11 
v12 
v13 
What do you think Edited by Leroy - 22 December 2011 at 1:53pm |
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ingl0rius
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Joined: 25 June 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 45 |
Posted: 20 December 2011 at 7:43am |
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It looks great! Are you going to add a background or leave it transparent?
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tuaarita
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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 8:10am |
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Some background but I haven't decided on what kind.
Edited by Leroy - 20 December 2011 at 8:10am |
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tuaarita
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 2:06am |
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v6 is up.
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Tha Kappa
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Joined: 16 January 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:02am |
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I like it! I especially like the simple frame for some odd reason.
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jeremy
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Joined: 25 November 2024 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 1704 |
Posted: 21 December 2011 at 4:20am |
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Space background is nice, not a fan of how saturated the darkest blue is.
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tuaarita
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 4:35am |
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Yeah I thought the whole thing was a little too bright. Updated.
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Lathien
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Joined: 07 August 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 84 |
Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:25am |
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I'm a little confused as to why a blackhole is white but I think the top and bottom of the planet don't match your perspective. The planet is being pulled to the back left whereas the points of the crescent shape the planet is now making are pointing directly to the left. Which also means we should see more of a whole planet on the right side facing us, keeping the crumbling strictly to the back-left face.
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tuaarita
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 7:52am |
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I never said it was a black hole :p. Updated
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Retrogasm
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Joined: 21 December 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
Posted: 21 December 2011 at 7:16pm |
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This is damn cool. The black hole, or whatever it is, really seems to glow. Awesome!
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Delicious
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Joined: 18 January 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 273 |
Posted: 22 December 2011 at 2:08am |
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Looking great. Really dislike the grey boarder though.
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tuaarita
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 2:18am |
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What do you suggest? It feels incomplete without it to me. I'll whip something else up in a little bit.
How about this? Simple but effective Edited by Leroy - 22 December 2011 at 3:02am |
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jalonso
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 6:26am |
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Looks good. Overall it reads as a 'line' layout wise. Maybe adding some subtle curves or swings in the BG will help matters.More comets, a nebula, space cloud, etc.
I kinda agree the darkest blue is over saturated and since you have the colors why not AA the blue glow on the right hand edge? You color sense remains top-notch :) Edited by jalonso - 22 December 2011 at 6:26am |
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tuaarita
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 7:07am |
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Thank you, I don't deserve such kind words.
I've toned down the darkest blue ever so slightly (again). AA'ed the right side of the glow, that was the only shade I could use there so it isn't very noticeable. Also made the background elliptical shape by expanding the dithered clouds and stars and now they kind of fade out.
http://hivemind.in/pj/specs/index.php?urls=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FRF7wv.png The nebula does sound cool but I'm afraid it would look cluttered. EDIT: Alternative ( aka me and the spiral had a falling out.) 
And retry  Edited by Leroy - 22 December 2011 at 10:45am |
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jalonso
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 10:52am |
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I like this best. The brown doesn't help the blue glow line? |
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tuaarita
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:04am |
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Didn't think of that. Back to the drawing board.
E: Nope the #3E2E2C doesn't help. That one? But it's an uncontrolled mess. 
Compromise? Edited by Leroy - 22 December 2011 at 1:53pm |
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tuaarita
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 2:12pm |
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I think I'm going to submit it. Here's what it is now.
Thanks for the help guys. You can check it out here too. http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/67219.htm Edited by Leroy - 22 December 2011 at 2:32pm |
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