You're getting better all the time :p You've done a nice jub with the colors and pixel placement. 

The tongue also seems to be his chin (whismur doesn't have a chin), and the chin seems to be where the body should end.  Try making the tongue folded over in front of his face instead of sticking straight out?

The exclamation makes whirling around his mouth are a huge distraction.  I would place it outside the sprite, maybe in a new form or imply loudness in another way. 

I don't think the feet are distinguished enough from the body.  And his feet look connected in one mass.  Whismur is basically just an abdomen with 2 stubs for feet like so
 

notice how the body is just a simple egg shape and has a definite end, with 2 stub feet.  And notice how your feet aren't properly separated


Edited by Frost Butt - 22 February 2012 at 2:18pm

If it's for the contest I think a Loudred would suit your cause better.

In any case, you might want to define the end of the body itself besides the mouth, because right now the area where the mouth is ending seems a bit vague... or at least, to me.

Here:

I don't know I'd kinda like to keep it as Whismur, I like it more than I do Loudred.

Ah, wow, thanks Frost!

If there's one things I'm bad with, it's anatomy...