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Rayovatron
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Topic: psychedelic head
Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:05pm

I would like to have opinions and advices for my wip.

Wip:

Where i am:

Its base on my drawing:

Inspired by this http://boards.420chan.org/his/src/1327701148331.jpg

other ref

thanks!

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Rayovatron
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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 3:01pm

Update:

what you think about the eye?

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 4:20pm

I like your drawing, but the eye is out of place in both pieces. Just look at your reference, the has has to be moved to the right. And the colors are not very psychedelic, too colorfull and happy in my opinion. Looks like colors from children's paint-box. Hm, and to the eye itself: Looks like a tiny rainbow, neither like an orb nor like a cross section.

Edited by Super17 - 27 February 2012 at 4:20pm

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 5:48pm

I tought the psychedelic style was based on bright and happy colors? About the eye i can move it, but i dont think it needs to be moved, every skull is diffrent, i would say mine is realistic... I apreciate your comment, but just saying the colors are bad and the eye isn't right doesn't really hepls me, i would much prefer to get suggestions and tips.

Thanks anyway.

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 6:28pm

Update:

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 7:47pm

Oh, to be honest, I had a completely different association from "psychedelic". I searched for some pictures now and you are right, I just would suggest you to add some magenta. And I think the black is distracting, but I guess you will remove it in the end.
Concerning the eye: I would remove the eyelid and render a propper eyeball or would render the eyeball under the eyelid different, that you can see that the eye is below it.

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 7:57pm

What do you mean the black is distracting? Its like the main colors.

Btw what did you tought "psychedelic" meant? I week ago I was associating the word with dark/crazy/gore when it's in fact more colorfull. From what i know it comes from drug experiances (mainly LSD and magic muchrooms).

Edited by Rayovatron - 27 February 2012 at 8:26pm

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 8:28pm

Update:

what do you think about this?

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Super17
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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 9:05pm

I mean that it has to much black inside the head, but it's not finished according to your drawing, so it will be less in the end I guess. So just forget about this sentence

And my first associating with "psychedelic" was the same like yours, haha

Plus I think the eye loooks better now, I like the second.
Keep it up!

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Posted: 28 February 2012 at 9:22am

The stem of the bong looks great. However you may want the bowl to seem a bit bit more bowlish. I think the Cone bowls are ugly. Also the bowl is far to close to the mouth piece.

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shampoop
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Posted: 28 February 2012 at 10:07am

Maybe this could help you fill in the cracks =]

from here

Edited by shampoop - 28 February 2012 at 10:08am

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Rayovatron
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Posted: 28 February 2012 at 1:19pm

Hey Super17 I heard you like magenta

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Posted: 28 February 2012 at 2:18pm

Haha, yeah, nice

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Posted: 28 February 2012 at 6:13pm

Update

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Posted: 29 February 2012 at 7:45pm

so?

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Posted: 01 March 2012 at 2:50am

Looks awesome. I kinda like the one on the right best, the black space between the shapes gives things a bit more room to breathe.

Now animate some crazy abstract rainbow patterns radiating out of his head!

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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Topic: psychedelic head Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:05pm
	I would like to have opinions and advices for my wip. Wip: Where i am: Its base on my drawing: Inspired by this http://boards.420chan.org/his/src/1327701148331.jpg other ref thanks!
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 3:01pm
	Update: what you think about the eye?
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Super17 Commander Joined: 18 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 117	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 4:20pm
	I like your drawing, but the eye is out of place in both pieces. Just look at your reference, the has has to be moved to the right. And the colors are not very psychedelic, too colorfull and happy in my opinion. Looks like colors from children's paint-box. Hm, and to the eye itself: Looks like a tiny rainbow, neither like an orb nor like a cross section. Edited by Super17 - 27 February 2012 at 4:20pm
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 5:48pm
	I tought the psychedelic style was based on bright and happy colors? About the eye i can move it, but i dont think it needs to be moved, every skull is diffrent, i would say mine is realistic... I apreciate your comment, but just saying the colors are bad and the eye isn't right doesn't really hepls me, i would much prefer to get suggestions and tips. Thanks anyway.
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 6:28pm
	Update:
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Super17 Commander Joined: 18 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 117	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 7:47pm
	Oh, to be honest, I had a completely different association from "psychedelic". I searched for some pictures now and you are right, I just would suggest you to add some magenta. And I think the black is distracting, but I guess you will remove it in the end. Concerning the eye: I would remove the eyelid and render a propper eyeball or would render the eyeball under the eyelid different, that you can see that the eye is below it.
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 7:57pm
	What do you mean the black is distracting? Its like the main colors. Btw what did you tought "psychedelic" meant? I week ago I was associating the word with dark/crazy/gore when it's in fact more colorfull. From what i know it comes from drug experiances (mainly LSD and magic muchrooms). Edited by Rayovatron - 27 February 2012 at 8:26pm
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 8:28pm
	Update: what do you think about this?
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Super17 Commander Joined: 18 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 117	Posted: 27 February 2012 at 9:05pm
	I mean that it has to much black inside the head, but it's not finished according to your drawing, so it will be less in the end I guess. So just forget about this sentence And my first associating with "psychedelic" was the same like yours, haha Plus I think the eye loooks better now, I like the second. Keep it up!
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Devano Seaman Joined: 13 February 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1	Posted: 28 February 2012 at 9:22am
	The stem of the bong looks great. However you may want the bowl to seem a bit bit more bowlish. I think the Cone bowls are ugly. Also the bowl is far to close to the mouth piece.
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shampoop Commander Joined: 26 July 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 183	Posted: 28 February 2012 at 10:07am
	Maybe this could help you fill in the cracks =] from here Edited by shampoop - 28 February 2012 at 10:08am
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 28 February 2012 at 1:19pm
	Hey Super17 I heard you like magenta
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Super17 Commander Joined: 18 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 117	Posted: 28 February 2012 at 2:18pm
	Haha, yeah, nice
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 28 February 2012 at 6:13pm
	Update
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Rayovatron Commander Joined: 24 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 29 February 2012 at 7:45pm
	so?
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L_Mo Seaman Joined: 01 December 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 01 March 2012 at 2:50am
	Looks awesome. I kinda like the one on the right best, the black space between the shapes gives things a bit more room to breathe. Now animate some crazy abstract rainbow patterns radiating out of his head!
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