Pixel Joint Forum: Volcano (Fire Element)

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   Hello pixel artists, I need help in a job.It's for a weekly event in pixelaria.org. I was trying to make a volcano to represent the fire element. No need to edit a sudden, just tell me if it was good in parts, if you can make a sketch.

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underb0ss Midshipman Joined: 26 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Topic: Volcano (Fire Element) Posted: 02 March 2012 at 7:49am
	Hello pixel artists, I need help in a job.It's for a weekly event in pixelaria.org. I was trying to make a volcano to represent the fire element. No need to edit a sudden, just tell me if it was good in parts, if you can make a sketch. Colors by: Jinn, slym and Gas 13 Reff: [x"> THANK YOU!
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underb0ss Midshipman Joined: 26 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 02 March 2012 at 7:50am
	If you make a sketch, will be based on inspiration.
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cure Rear Admiral Joined: 23 October 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2770	Posted: 02 March 2012 at 9:34am
	So make a volcano, and then we'll critique it. What do you want us to critique right now? "Fire here"? Have a little something to show before you start a thread.
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underb0ss Midshipman Joined: 26 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 02 March 2012 at 9:52am
	*Originally posted by cure* So make a volcano, and then we'll critique it. What do you want us to critique right now? "Fire here"? Have a little something to show before you start a thread. I'm working on it, but I just wanted to show what I'll do in future editions. I'm sorry. :]
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underb0ss Midshipman Joined: 26 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 02 March 2012 at 12:13pm
	- NEW EDIT -
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Delicious Rear Admiral Joined: 19 July 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 250	Posted: 02 March 2012 at 12:25pm
	Doesn't read as a volcano to me. The gradient type shading you are going for does not work well for a volcano which is has a ton of texture. Try looking at references to help you have a better understanding of what a volcano should look like.
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underb0ss Midshipman Joined: 26 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 02 March 2012 at 4:35pm
	*Originally posted by Delicious* Doesn't read as a volcano to me. The gradient type shading you are going for does not work well for a volcano which is has a ton of texture. Try looking at references to help you have a better understanding of what a volcano should look like. Thanks for the tips, I will finish this work today.
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underb0ss Midshipman Joined: 26 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 03 March 2012 at 10:46am
	Finished. Thanks for all! Specially for .Planet (Merez)
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cure Rear Admiral Joined: 23 October 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2770	Posted: 03 March 2012 at 11:33am
	you've only just posted a real attempt at it, and you're cutting off feedback and calling it finished already?
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underb0ss Midshipman Joined: 26 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 03 March 2012 at 3:24pm
	*Originally posted by cure* you've only just posted a real attempt at it, and you're cutting off feedback and calling it finished already? I had the time to end it and could not arrange time WIP, started this pixel art on Thursday, and still managed to send the missing pixel art 4 minutes to form the event expires. I'll do a remake of it next week editing it and posting progress on this topic. But I think I was good at what I expected. -------------------- Thanks for all.
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