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Quote Colonel_Bracket Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2012 at 10:32am
Hm. I might leave the darker mid-shade and dither the lighter one, since I'd really like to have some water and a lily pad down there.
This is my first sprite where I really have to think about my pallete.

Going to make the basket brown, so that I can use it for rushes and darker tones on the tongue.

@Long: The colours seem unsaturated, but shading will probably improve that.
The bottom left hoof seems a tad square.
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Quote moondrome Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2012 at 10:50am
this is awesome. I know the trees in this WIP look a little sketchy for pixel art but they have an "impressionist" look that I totally like.
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Quote Lóng Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2012 at 11:26am
I compromised resulting into this.



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Quote Reo Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2012 at 4:24pm
Using Dawnbringers pallete. Pretty sure the anatomy is all screwed. Crits on that are very welcome!

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Quote dpixel Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2012 at 6:25pm
@Reo  -  Maybe move the get joint down a bit and move them forward a tad?  I think it's a leg position thing.  The rest looks great.
hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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Quote failureboy Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2012 at 7:55pm


Still not sure about the basket color. Lose the grass maybe? Leave the transparent BG, or should I add a color (I think I have room for one more)?

I'll prob'ly lose the tree in the background - just toying with the idea.

What else ain't working for y'all?
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Quote Colonel_Bracket Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 12:04am

Nearing completion, yay! 15 colours including black.
(Excluding a couple stray white pixels on the side of one of the rushes)
Transparency counts as a colour, correct?

@failureboy: You might want to try lowering the snake's branch so that it's closer to the lower one. Although the current negative space between the snake/basket and the lower branch is quite nice.
I'd lose the tree too. I does fill out the piece more, but I'd do it with the existing elements.
Coniferous trees and snakes does seem a little odd too.
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Quote VonKarma Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 3:52am



Hi, this is my first submit. The amazing EggPanda!
I have to clean it and fix the dithering but i think i can get it in time.
Hope you like it!
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Quote Yielmo Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 11:46am
Finished mine:
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/69660.htm


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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 12:33pm
strange border, lots of pillow-shading
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Quote Yielmo Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 12:47pm
Oh. I didn't try to do pillow shading. Gah. IMO it doesn't really look like it.
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Quote Genler Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 2:47pm
I also finished my entry.
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/69655.htm



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Quote Reo Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 5:59pm

@Dpixel: noted! small update on the legs, still wonky. Background will be re-positioned to fit.

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Quote Kathyrria Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 7:24pm
And submitted. If I update it all the changes will only be made on my DA account.

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Quote dpixel Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2012 at 10:56pm
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@Dpixel: noted! small update on the legs, still wonky. Background will be re-positioned to fit.

Yes!  Almost looked like it was going to fall forward before.
hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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Quote Super17 Replybullet Posted: 15 April 2012 at 9:20am
@Reo: In my opinion, the mountains doesn't look as they are far away, because they have the same level of detail like the ostrich. And the birdy is placed to high I think, he could almost trample down the mountains 
Great job with the palette though.
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Quote Reo Replybullet Posted: 15 April 2012 at 9:31am
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@Reo: In my opinion, the mountains doesn't look as they are far away, because they have the same level of detail like the ostrich. And the birdy is placed to high I think, he could almost trample down the mountains?Great job with the palette though.


Thanks! Yeah, that's what I meant with re-positioning the background. The effect is still there, but less pronounced in the finished version.
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Quote Clubby Replybullet Posted: 15 April 2012 at 3:31pm
 
My first entry.
Needs better shading and some cleaning.
 


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Quote Yielmo Replybullet Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:08pm
Meh. This is totally unfair. My entry won't even get approved by the time the challenge ends.

Really? At least give me a chance.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 15 April 2012 at 7:11pm
Challenge voting hasn't started yet. You are not at a disadvantage.
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