Pixel Joint Forum: Onyx

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   My character Virus Onyx

know her body needs work, her arm looks short and her shoulder odd, any other CC at this point?
I really want this to look good. I tend to always make the same mistakes when it comes to anatomy  It's like my eyes don't realize.

Her eyes are a bit "upturned" but I hope it looks good that way?
Oh and I think I will downsize that HUGE bow.

Edited by H|F - 24 April 2012 at 10:57pm

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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Topic: Onyx Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:57pm
	My character Virus Onyx know her body needs work, her arm looks short and her shoulder odd, any other CC at this point? I really want this to look good. I tend to always make the same mistakes when it comes to anatomy It's like my eyes don't realize. Her eyes are a bit "upturned" but I hope it looks good that way? Oh and I think I will downsize that HUGE bow. Edited by H\|F - 24 April 2012 at 10:57pm
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Mngwa Midshipman Joined: 17 December 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44	Posted: 25 April 2012 at 11:03am
	I really have a problem with the eyes. It look that one of them is looking down and the other up. The shoulders should be both the same size, but one is small and the other is big. Even if it was perpective, the neck is in bad position, it should be more between shoulders. It is almost on the one of the shoulders now. You should change collarbones too, they look odd and the chest looks more like back. Wow, so much critics .. but feedback is always good, isn't it. It can help you to get better. Edited by Mngwa - 25 April 2012 at 11:06am
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Zeratanus Commander Joined: 02 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 517	Posted: 25 April 2012 at 11:38am
	I agree with Mngwa, but I want to point out specifically that it's the way the eyes are looking, not their shape, that is off. Mngwa said it too, just wanted to be clear since you were asking about it.
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cure Rear Admiral Joined: 23 October 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2771	Posted: 25 April 2012 at 12:24pm
	I dunno, they have a pretty extreme diagonal/slanted shape. Hand looks small, head's probably a little big for the body
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dpixel Commander Joined: 26 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 489	Posted: 25 April 2012 at 3:19pm
	I think the eyes are ok. I think she needs a more defined cheekbone and more of a left shoulder.
	hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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Mngwa Midshipman Joined: 17 December 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44	Posted: 25 April 2012 at 7:27pm
	*Originally posted by dpixel* I think the eyes are ok. I think she needs a more defined cheekbone and more of a left shoulder. You must be joking. I wouldn't want such eyes for sure .. he should repair just those pupils which look in different directions.
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dpixel Commander Joined: 26 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 489	Posted: 26 April 2012 at 3:32am
	*Originally posted by Mngwa* *Originally posted by dpixel* I think the eyes are ok. I think she needs a more defined cheekbone and more of a left shoulder. You must be joking. I wouldn't want such eyes for sure .. he should repair just those pupils which look in different directions. I never said the eyes are perfect, but they don't bother me as much as other things. Besides, I recognize her style and the eyes are consistent.
	hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 29 April 2012 at 7:44pm
	also, a wip I haven't worked on in too long
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