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Bleda
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    Posted: 01 May 2012 at 6:11am


How is it and what can I do to improve it? I think I need to work on the palette.

EDIT: Edited it quite a bit.

Edited by Bleda - 01 May 2012 at 8:45am
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Quote BorgisKhan Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2012 at 10:27am
you know what's really throwing me off is the giant fence in the background. it's made in the style of a backyard or even front yard picket fence but it's the size of a forest:) i'd make it shorter and smaller, not rising above the houses. that way you can have more awesome sky and stars in the back ground too.

..also some chimneys:) looks cool!
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Quote Bleda Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2012 at 10:32am
Thank you for the comments. Chimneys are a good idea; I might edit the fence, too.
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