Pixel Joint Forum: Female and fish anatomy

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   Typical of me....

whatever   This is still in the early stages, the colors aren't final and I know that her hand needs work and the fins colors/shading/texture is mostly color test. I will edit her top too!

Her face is bothering me mostly besides what I already pointed out.

All cc is welcome 

Here is the very original btw, if anyone would like to see 

Edited by H|F - 06 July 2012 at 1:38pm

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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Topic: Female and fish anatomy Posted: 22 June 2012 at 11:42pm
	Typical of me.... whatever This is still in the early stages, the colors aren't final and I know that her hand needs work and the fins colors/shading/texture is mostly color test. I will edit her top too! Her face is bothering me mostly besides what I already pointed out. All cc is welcome Here is the very original btw, if anyone would like to see Edited by H\|F - 06 July 2012 at 1:38pm
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Mngwa Midshipman Joined: 17 December 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44	Posted: 23 June 2012 at 9:01am
	I think the face is ok. I mostly like hair and end of the tail, because they are very well shaded. What I dislike a bit is her bottom half - imho it should be more plastic and "wet" - it just doesn't look like scales.
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LachieD Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 72	Posted: 24 June 2012 at 4:45pm
	Yeah, my thoughts exactly. I should be more shiny and...scaley. :) And I think that the transition between her skin and the bottom part needs some more seamless transition, in texture and/or color.
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 24 June 2012 at 7:52pm
	here is a bit of an edit, worked on the colors/shading some. I feel better 'bout her face. Her tail is mostly what I have to work on besides any edits I might do due to CC I hope to get ;D also I am not sure about the connection of her human/fish half.... feel like it still isn't right? OH and I need to work on the lighting I know it isn't right, sorry!
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ollantaytambo Midshipman IGNORE ME Joined: 12 February 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 50	Posted: 28 June 2012 at 4:26pm
	If she was in water her hair would be straight not f**king spread everywhere
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Daanvdk Seaman Joined: 07 November 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 28 June 2012 at 4:37pm
	That's when you get out of the water and it's wet, because your hair isn't heavier than the water it would actually be "f**cking spread everywhere" while you're underwater.
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Aorta Seaman Joined: 11 February 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 28 June 2012 at 7:05pm
	ollantaytambo's a known troll, don't mind him/her. The highlights on the hair are a little harsh? I also feel like the hair is weird in how it's clumped into giant strands, though this might be just opinion.
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 05 July 2012 at 9:48pm
	Sorry it's not more of an edit.... tweaking small things here and there
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 06 July 2012 at 1:39pm
	Sorry for the bump.... I really need help with her stupid face Eye edits would be cool ;)
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Friend Commander Joined: 02 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 553	Posted: 06 July 2012 at 2:24pm
	I can't figure out how to pixel eyes either xD You have to convey so much in such a few amount of pixels, you really have to get creative and know how to make the most out of the pixel placement and color. So hard x_x Anyway, I tried and kinda failed. Edited by Friend - 06 July 2012 at 2:37pm
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LordHannu Midshipman Joined: 04 August 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 40	Posted: 06 July 2012 at 2:54pm
	tried to make it more simple. I liked your first face you did. became unsure about the eye colors so i just made white pupils hehe. Edited by LordHannu - 06 July 2012 at 2:56pm
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dpixel Commander Joined: 26 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 489	Posted: 10 July 2012 at 2:17pm
	I would just go with plain dark for the eyes. The face and body are really too small to show much eye detail. Also the hair is cool, but kind of Medusa-looking. It doesn't really read mermaid hair.
	hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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scorpi1988 Seaman Joined: 09 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 10 July 2012 at 2:54pm
	For me first face was lovely,it's hot. But now it's better because looks mystical. Mayby more look like shell for bra? The hand is too big! I would also try reduce her neck. About the arm, i think this will by much more interesting: The second arm could be also like that...
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 11 July 2012 at 1:20pm
	Ok its not much of an edit but I tried to go back to one of the first faces and edit it, how does it look now? also, I changed her arms a bit but they don't seem as floaty, Shellbra.... yeah that was my first thought for her top but I thought it would be better to go away from the norm but I'll make one to see what you all think?
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 11 July 2012 at 6:11pm
	also,
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 16 July 2012 at 10:58pm

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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 16 July 2012 at 11:56pm

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Yuran Commander Joined: 07 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224	Posted: 17 July 2012 at 2:07am
	Edited by Yuran - 17 July 2012 at 2:33am
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dpixel Commander Joined: 26 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 489	Posted: 17 July 2012 at 11:20am
	Cool claw thing. A quick edit on making the face prettier. Maybe not what you're looking for but...
	hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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H\|F Commander Joined: 18 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 17 July 2012 at 4:07pm
	@Yuran, Thank you! that is very helpful!!! I will keep working on her face shape/color! @Dpixel, Thanks, idk why but I sketched her in a really odd pose which made it look like she was in pain/holding her arm and it made me think of witchblade ;P Your edit is very helpful as well thank you!!!
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maganegorap Seaman Joined: 12 March 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 38	Posted: 17 July 2012 at 7:47pm
	I did not add much, just shadows in the right arm and a dithering on the left.
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