Pixel Joint Forum: My first Pixel-Art!

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WyPuK
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Topic: My first Pixel-Art!
Posted: 05 July 2012 at 12:02am

So I've recently drawn a Pixel Maniac's Silhouette.
It's my very first work, SO WATCH IT LEAVE FEEDBACK.

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Pookaball
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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 6:04am

Ow, it's... Weird.
Looks more like some MS Paint thing.

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AirStyle
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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 10:50am

Hey, don't knock MS Paint! It's gotten a lot better. Anyways, I don't know what to say about this piece since you don't have much in it. How about some more detail, and then we can say something.

However, you might want to freshen up your person in the foreground.

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SeaFire
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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 7:02pm

I would much rather use MS Paint for pixel art than Photoshop, even if PS has more features.

The concept needs to be reworked a bit. Shoulders, head, and that weird bulge on the side of his leg.

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cure
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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 5:52pm

There are much better available programs than MSpaint, it has no particular advantages so I don't see why anyone would use it over a program geared toward pixel art (other than familiarity). I think Pookaball was trying to say it looks like uncontrolled/lazy oekaki as opposed to pixel art anyway.

the anatomy is bad and the piece is boring. do something other than a silhouette and use references. And don't make multiple threads, particularly if you aren't that involved with either of them.

shoulders are too broad, hips are too wide for the chest (pear shaped), arms are stiff, hands are blocks, feet are curiously absent, head is too small, neck is more or less absent, looks like he's holding a knife by the blade. most importantly I think is that the pose just isn't interesting. Again, make sure to use references, especially when dealing with human anatomy.

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WIP (Work In Progress)
Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : WIP (Work In Progress)

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WyPuK Seaman Joined: 04 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Topic: My first Pixel-Art! Posted: 05 July 2012 at 12:02am
	So I've recently drawn a Pixel Maniac's Silhouette. It's my very first work, SO WATCH IT LEAVE FEEDBACK.
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Pookaball Seaman Joined: 03 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34	Posted: 05 July 2012 at 6:04am
	Ow, it's... Weird. Looks more like some MS Paint thing.
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AirStyle Commander Joined: 07 March 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 290	Posted: 05 July 2012 at 10:50am
	Hey, don't knock MS Paint! It's gotten a lot better. Anyways, I don't know what to say about this piece since you don't have much in it. How about some more detail, and then we can say something. However, you might want to freshen up your person in the foreground.
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SeaFire Seaman Joined: 29 June 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 07 July 2012 at 7:02pm
	I would much rather use MS Paint for pixel art than Photoshop, even if PS has more features. The concept needs to be reworked a bit. Shoulders, head, and that weird bulge on the side of his leg.
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cure Rear Admiral Joined: 23 October 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2775	Posted: 08 July 2012 at 5:52pm
	There are much better available programs than MSpaint, it has no particular advantages so I don't see why anyone would use it over a program geared toward pixel art (other than familiarity). I think Pookaball was trying to say it looks like uncontrolled/lazy oekaki as opposed to pixel art anyway. the anatomy is bad and the piece is boring. do something other than a silhouette and use references. And don't make multiple threads, particularly if you aren't that involved with either of them. shoulders are too broad, hips are too wide for the chest (pear shaped), arms are stiff, hands are blocks, feet are curiously absent, head is too small, neck is more or less absent, looks like he's holding a knife by the blade. most importantly I think is that the pose just isn't interesting. Again, make sure to use references, especially when dealing with human anatomy.
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