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imnumberfour
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Quote imnumberfour Replybullet Topic: Cute scene.
    Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:48am
What started out as my first tree, which then evolved into a few bits and bobs which became my avatar on some sites has now turned into a small scene.



Pallet (11 colours):



 I wanted it to look like soemthing that came out of a quaint RPG, but I didnt want to make tiles because I am going to try and texture the ground as a whole, not repeat tiles.

Things I think are bad:

The duck *cringe*. Could not get it into the perspective or look good.
Perspective: Is everything alright?
Composition: Trying to steer it clear from a lot of random elements thrown into a scene.

It is obviously highly WIP, and I want C&C as well as what to add to it. :)

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Quote peytonisgreat Replybullet Posted: 04 August 2012 at 7:35pm
Hi #4, didn't think I would see you here :p Looks good, maybe add some texture to the grass though.
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Quote cjke7777 Replybullet Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:20am
Might be just me, but I feel like the shadow at the base of the larger rock is too dark or big relative to the size of the rock. For example, the rock seems to be casting a darker/thicker shadow than the tree even though the tree is much taller/bigger.

I love the tree though - very nice. And the water too. Nice palette choice - did you come up with it yourself?
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Quote imnumberfour Replybullet Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:54am
I made the pallet myself. :)

I have made a few edits to this, but my laptop had to have a factory reset, so i'll try and find them one imgur when it gets back from the shop. :)
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Quote Vell123 Replybullet Posted: 11 August 2012 at 12:13pm
It doe look really good. Maybe you can give me a few pointers about color palettes
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