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imnumberfour
Midshipman
Joined: 27 December 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
![]() Topic: Cute scene.Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:48am |
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What started out as my first tree, which then evolved into a few bits and bobs which became my avatar on some sites has now turned into a small scene.
![]() Pallet (11 colours): ![]() I wanted it to look like soemthing that came out of a quaint RPG, but I didnt want to make tiles because I am going to try and texture the ground as a whole, not repeat tiles. Things I think are bad: The duck *cringe*. Could not get it into the perspective or look good. Perspective: Is everything alright? Composition: Trying to steer it clear from a lot of random elements thrown into a scene. It is obviously highly WIP, and I want C&C as well as what to add to it. :) |
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peytonisgreat
Seaman
Joined: 02 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 22 |
![]() Posted: 04 August 2012 at 7:35pm |
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Hi #4, didn't think I would see you here :p Looks good, maybe add some texture to the grass though.
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cjke7777
Seaman
Joined: 31 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
![]() Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:20am |
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Might be just me, but I feel like the shadow at the base of the larger rock is too dark or big relative to the size of the rock. For example, the rock seems to be casting a darker/thicker shadow than the tree even though the tree is much taller/bigger.
I love the tree though - very nice. And the water too. Nice palette choice - did you come up with it yourself? |
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imnumberfour
Midshipman
Joined: 27 December 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
![]() Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:54am |
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I made the pallet myself. :)
I have made a few edits to this, but my laptop had to have a factory reset, so i'll try and find them one imgur when it gets back from the shop. :) |
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Vell123
Seaman
Joined: 25 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 35 |
![]() Posted: 11 August 2012 at 12:13pm |
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It doe look really good. Maybe you can give me a few pointers about color palettes
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