Pixel Joint Forum: Travelling Trapinch

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So I thought I'd search the forum after not being here for quite a while. philippejugnet's "Valley of kings" inspired me to pixel again, so I thought I'd make something.

Taking a break for now. I haven't really pixelled a lot of scenery before, so I thought I might as well get some feedback.

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Exxo Seaman Joined: 15 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Topic: Travelling Trapinch Posted: 31 July 2012 at 12:28pm
	So I thought I'd search the forum after not being here for quite a while. philippejugnet's "Valley of kings" inspired me to pixel again, so I thought I'd make something. Taking a break for now. I haven't really pixelled a lot of scenery before, so I thought I might as well get some feedback.
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Yuran Commander Joined: 07 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224	Posted: 31 July 2012 at 1:10pm
	On the left side a lot of dark, on the right side a lot of accents. And anyway, I did some I can not say, so it feels good ... На левой стороне много тёмного, на правой стороне много акцентов. И вообще я ничего определённого не могу сказать, вроде всё нормально... Edited by Yuran - 31 July 2012 at 1:28pm
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LachieD Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 72	Posted: 31 July 2012 at 1:50pm
	I like the sun and the clouds in the background, but the rest is too unfinished to render a coherent critic.
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Exxo Seaman Joined: 15 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 01 August 2012 at 6:55pm
	I worked more on the sky and cleaned up some lines. Still, I never made clouds before, so some tricks and tips is appreciated.
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Exxo Seaman Joined: 15 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 03 August 2012 at 6:14pm
	Uh, yeah, tweeked some colours are fixed a few things. I still need help on this y'know. If I'm going to keep the colour count down to some degree, then I need to dither, but I'm awful at that.
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Yuran Commander Joined: 07 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224	Posted: 03 August 2012 at 10:52pm
	Rock behind of Trapinch should bend a little - or something to put in, and then a lot of empty space I allowed myself to make small changes in colors, that they were not as boring.. Скалу за Трапинчем надо немного искривить - или чтото туда поместить, а то много пустого пространства Я позволил себе сделать небольшие исправления в цветах, чтоб они не были такими скучными.
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Daanvdk Seaman Joined: 07 November 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 04 August 2012 at 8:12am
	Imo your edit kinda ruined the piece Yuran, I liked the old colors way better and your shading on the little guy takes away it's cute and cartoony look, which in my opinion was a good thing about him.
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Exxo Seaman Joined: 15 November 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 04 August 2012 at 11:02am
	Thanks a lot! I think I'll stick to the old colours, but I'll be using that as a template for some further shading, if that's alright o: (oh and trapinches don't have noses)
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