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Buddy90
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Joined: 27 October 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 141 |
   Topic: Start AgainPosted: 01 August 2012 at 9:36pm |
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Hey guys, it's been a long time since I've pixelled anything, so I decided to try away a simple mockup to get my feet wet.
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technos
Seaman 
Joined: 02 August 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
Posted: 02 August 2012 at 9:39am |
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Looks very gameboy-ee. I like it!
I've made a little bit of modification:
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LachieD
Midshipman 
Joined: 24 June 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 72 |
Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:38pm |
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I like the colors. The ground tiles seem odd and unrefined. What are they supposed to represent? The background needs more clear lines, as well as the sun. Why isn't it a perfect circle?
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Buddy90
Commander
Joined: 27 October 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 141 |
Posted: 02 August 2012 at 9:38pm |
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OK, I took the comments into consideration. I also changed the characters to more interesting ones.
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technos
Seaman
Joined: 02 August 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
Posted: 08 August 2012 at 5:29am |
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Love that plow
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technos
Seaman
Joined: 02 August 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
Posted: 09 August 2012 at 5:05am |
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The platform looks like a train track. It would be REALLY cool if that was a train with a little tophat attacking the character
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