This is pretty much in its final stages (going to be public soon). Some constructive feedback would be highly appreciated! I did "cheat" a bit on the glows, but other than that, they are several pieces combined artwork.

Original:


Current: (100% pixels)


Edited by Halffish - 14 August 2012 at 3:28pm

The girl's breasts must be lower
Two characters in the center too fractional and lost at the same fractional background.
You can try to identify them using some sort of aura that they fence off from the general background.
Or use are not as sharp contrasts of light and shadow

Два персонажа в центре слишком дробные и теряются на таком же дробном фоне.
Можно попробовать выделить их используя какой нибудь ореол, который отгородит их от общего фона.
Или используй не такие чёткие контрасты света и тени

Edited by Yuran - 10 August 2012 at 2:08pm

And in this case, she will be higher of this guy :)
You can keep her torso in place, and the whole picture up above XD

Edited by Yuran - 10 August 2012 at 2:13pm

glitters of glass, "R" and terrible eyes - oll are have /GPG effect of deading the whole pixel art style

CUT and PASTE and correct some contrast accents in senter

Edited by Yuran - 10 August 2012 at 4:00pm

Here is an update with some pixel pushing and pixel-formed flares. Tweaked the background color to separate the foreground objects a little more.
77 colors.



Edited by Halffish - 14 August 2012 at 4:05am

Thank u for all your help kind sir!