Pixel Joint Forum: Tongue Wip

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Marques_
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Topic: Tongue Wip
Posted: 27 April 2013 at 6:35am

Could help me finish this pixel art?

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Edited by Marques_ - 27 April 2013 at 7:15am

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cure
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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 7:24am

First tip:
USE A REFERENCE!
Always. Especially with anatomy you're unfamiliar with.

The teeth are not little squares equal in size. The frontals tend to be larger, the canines pointy, etc. look at real teeth, replicate what you see. As it is, all of the teeth are way too small. And the tongue is so large it couldn't even fit in the mouth. Also use your references to achieve more naturalistic skin tones, desaturated purple-reds rather than fire engine red.

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Marques_
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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 7:46am

Improved teeth?

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Edited by Marques_ - 27 April 2013 at 10:21am

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cure
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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 3:51pm

Better but still very off. Mind posting the reference you used?frontal incisors in particular are way too narrow, tongue is still massive. Given any thought to the background?

Edited by cure - 27 April 2013 at 3:51pm

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Bryroz
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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 4:47pm

This was a very quick edit I did. I edited some of your colors. But, I noticed that some of them are not even used. Tongues still have alot of detail to them, I know that the one I made is perhaps a bit rough. Mostly because I rushed on it. But, try to keep in mind of where your light source is. And it appeared to be on the top of the canvas. But the teeth, back and front of the tongue kinda thew it off. Also, your piece needs some AA, which I would consider you look at this for help on that
http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299

Hope this helps you some more. And like what Cure was saying about the reference would be very helpful.

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Marques_
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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 6:53pm

Originally posted by Bryroz

Very good your edition.

Thanks for tutorial.
I intend to improve

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Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : WIP (Work In Progress)

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Marques_ Seaman Joined: 27 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Topic: Tongue Wip Posted: 27 April 2013 at 6:35am
	Could help me finish this pixel art? *Edit: Edited by Marques_ - 27 April 2013 at 7:15am
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 27 April 2013 at 7:24am
	First tip: USE A REFERENCE! Always. Especially with anatomy you're unfamiliar with. The teeth are not little squares equal in size. The frontals tend to be larger, the canines pointy, etc. look at real teeth, replicate what you see. As it is, all of the teeth are way too small. And the tongue is so large it couldn't even fit in the mouth. Also use your references to achieve more naturalistic skin tones, desaturated purple-reds rather than fire engine red.
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Marques_ Seaman Joined: 27 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 27 April 2013 at 7:46am
	Improved teeth? *Edit Edited by Marques_ - 27 April 2013 at 10:21am
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 27 April 2013 at 3:51pm
	Better but still very off. Mind posting the reference you used?frontal incisors in particular are way too narrow, tongue is still massive. Given any thought to the background? Edited by cure - 27 April 2013 at 3:51pm
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Bryroz Seaman Joined: 23 November 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 27 April 2013 at 4:47pm
	This was a very quick edit I did. I edited some of your colors. But, I noticed that some of them are not even used. Tongues still have alot of detail to them, I know that the one I made is perhaps a bit rough. Mostly because I rushed on it. But, try to keep in mind of where your light source is. And it appeared to be on the top of the canvas. But the teeth, back and front of the tongue kinda thew it off. Also, your piece needs some AA, which I would consider you look at this for help on that http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299 Hope this helps you some more. And like what Cure was saying about the reference would be very helpful.
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Marques_ Seaman Joined: 27 April 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 27 April 2013 at 6:53pm
	*Originally posted by Bryroz* This was a very quick edit I did. I edited some of your colors. But, I noticed that some of them are not even used. Tongues still have alot of detail to them, I know that the one I made is perhaps a bit rough. Mostly because I rushed on it. But, try to keep in mind of where your light source is. And it appeared to be on the top of the canvas. But the teeth, back and front of the tongue kinda thew it off. Also, your piece needs some AA, which I would consider you look at this for help on that http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299 Hope this helps you some more. And like what Cure was saying about the reference would be very helpful. Very good your edition. Thanks for tutorial. I intend to improve
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