Pixel Joint Forum: some advice please

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   Hi! i just started working with pixel animation and i was wondering if i could get a little critic about what i have done! thanks in advance

http://imgur.com/6zKbTF5

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oal Seaman Joined: 19 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Topic: some advice please Posted: 19 May 2013 at 11:32am
	Hi! i just started working with pixel animation and i was wondering if i could get a little critic about what i have done! thanks in advance http://imgur.com/6zKbTF5
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AtskaHeart Commander Joined: 06 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 114	Posted: 19 May 2013 at 11:40am
	I have no idea where is the light source, which is probably making the piece hard to read. As a side note, post images instead of links, so we can zoom in.
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skittle Commander Joined: 20 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 350	Posted: 19 May 2013 at 12:20pm
	It looks cool but as Atska said the readability of this piece is kinda weird.
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Numberplay Commander Joined: 28 October 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 130	Posted: 19 May 2013 at 12:43pm
	for those lazy to copy paste the link. Edited by Numberplay - 19 May 2013 at 12:43pm
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oal Seaman Joined: 19 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 19 May 2013 at 3:10pm
	thanks a lot, i couldnt load the image since i just registered today, but thanks for the comments, ill work on the shadows
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 May 2013 at 4:06pm
	hit that icon when posting and then paste the direct image link without any codes http://www.your host.com/image name.gif or png
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oal Seaman Joined: 19 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 19 May 2013 at 8:21pm
	awesome thanks!
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oal Seaman Joined: 19 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:17pm
	Is this better?
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