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philippejugnet
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:20pm

hey ya guys! :) ~~IM BACK~~

any comments?

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yaomon17
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:28pm

his chin is too square and large. His nose is also a bit small. Ear is slightly too big. Other than that seems fine.

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CraftyPixel
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 7:02pm

- Love it! , Yeah... his face seems a bit off for this specific scene. But this is really good for a start! -( make a suspicious face ;P )

Edited by CraftyPixel - 21 May 2013 at 7:02pm

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King of Games
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 9:17pm

Love the colors, the dude looks like JGL from Looper, but yeah his head is too big.

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philippejugnet
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:11pm

ty guys! :) is this looking better?

I was thinking about adding a gun to his left hand but a3um had that idea already D:
so, what do you guys think?

edit:
by looking at it now the position looks like im copying him :S i might change it

Edited by philippejugnet - 22 May 2013 at 6:24pm

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RileyFiery
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:22pm

I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar.

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philippejugnet
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:33pm

Originally posted by RileyFiery

I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar.

ah, i'm glad it doest look like his, because i dont want people saying crap about my work.

does this work ? :D

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REF I USED FOR THE GUN ( i dont know much about guns nor gun designs D: )

Edited by philippejugnet - 24 May 2013 at 5:25pm

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Numberplay
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:57pm

What if he holds a light source in his other hand?

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philippejugnet
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:26pm

Originally posted by Numberplay

What if he holds a light source in his other hand?

maybe a lantern? i'll try sketching it here ;) ty for sharing buddy :D

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RileyFiery
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:52pm

Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind.

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philippejugnet
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:23pm

Originally posted by RileyFiery

Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind.

whaaat D: there are no barrels in the picture, unless there is something else called barrel and I am not aware of.
wip update btw :)

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Numberplay
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:34pm

The barrel of a gun.

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DoctorDRG
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:57am

I would angle the gun more towards the floor or add some more space to the left side of the canvas.

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Friend
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:58am

the entire anatomy looks off. The angle of the face seems really weird and off from the turn of his neck, which is also off with the perspective of the body making him look like he's doing a strange contortion. The direction of his eyes also seem to be backwards with the tilt of his head. The facial features are WAY WAY too small, even for me, and my facial features are tiny. The original ear size was natural, around 1/4 to slightly larger of the head is normal ear size. The other facial features also need serious resizing. Check facial feature proportions of a male adult. His right arm/shoulder region is incredibly awkward and unnatural

Edited by Friend - 25 May 2013 at 11:00am

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philippejugnet
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 11:17am

decided to remove the gun~~

In the final stages already ;D

edit:
just read your comment friend ill try to read a little bit about it, i wasnt sure about the arm, since you meantioned im going to change it :)

edit:
from your critique, this is what I changed, idk what is wrong with the arm but doesnt look good, ill make another edit with the changes in the arm

arm edit:
guess this looks way better :D just have to fix some of the AA and some shapes :)

Edited by philippejugnet - 25 May 2013 at 11:48am

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skittle
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 2:20pm

Oh boy... you work fast.
This is looking pretty awesome though! Definitely gonna fav this when it's done.

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philippejugnet
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Posted: 26 May 2013 at 6:59am

calling it done friends :)

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philippejugnet Commander Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459	Topic: Suit Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:20pm
	hey ya guys! :) ~~IM BACK~~ any comments? ref
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yaomon17 Commander Joined: 07 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:28pm
	his chin is too square and large. His nose is also a bit small. Ear is slightly too big. Other than that seems fine.
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CraftyPixel Midshipman Joined: 19 January 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 7:02pm
	- Love it! , Yeah... his face seems a bit off for this specific scene. But this is really good for a start! -( make a suspicious face ;P ) Edited by CraftyPixel - 21 May 2013 at 7:02pm
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King of Games Midshipman Joined: 02 December 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 9:17pm
	Love the colors, the dude looks like JGL from Looper, but yeah his head is too big.
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philippejugnet Commander Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459	Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:11pm
	ty guys! :) is this looking better? I was thinking about adding a gun to his left hand but a3um had that idea already D: so, what do you guys think? edit: by looking at it now the position looks like im copying him :S i might change it Edited by philippejugnet - 22 May 2013 at 6:24pm
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RileyFiery Midshipman Joined: 11 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 78	Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:22pm
	I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar.
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philippejugnet Commander Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459	Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:33pm
	*Originally posted by RileyFiery* I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar. ah, i'm glad it doest look like his, because i dont want people saying crap about my work. does this work ? :D edit: REF I USED FOR THE GUN ( i dont know much about guns nor gun designs D: ) Edited by philippejugnet - 24 May 2013 at 5:25pm
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Numberplay Commander Joined: 28 October 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 130	Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:57pm
	What if he holds a light source in his other hand?
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philippejugnet Commander Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459	Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:26pm
	*Originally posted by Numberplay* What if he holds a light source in his other hand? maybe a lantern? i'll try sketching it here ;) ty for sharing buddy :D
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RileyFiery Midshipman Joined: 11 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 78	Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:52pm
	Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind.
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philippejugnet Commander Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459	Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:23pm
	*Originally posted by RileyFiery* Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind. whaaat D: there are no barrels in the picture, unless there is something else called barrel and I am not aware of. wip update btw :)
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Numberplay Commander Joined: 28 October 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 130	Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:34pm
	The barrel of a gun.
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DoctorDRG Seaman Joined: 31 August 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:57am
	I would angle the gun more towards the floor or add some more space to the left side of the canvas.
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Friend Commander Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710	Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:58am
	the entire anatomy looks off. The angle of the face seems really weird and off from the turn of his neck, which is also off with the perspective of the body making him look like he's doing a strange contortion. The direction of his eyes also seem to be backwards with the tilt of his head. The facial features are WAY WAY too small, even for me, and my facial features are tiny. The original ear size was natural, around 1/4 to slightly larger of the head is normal ear size. The other facial features also need serious resizing. Check facial feature proportions of a male adult. His right arm/shoulder region is incredibly awkward and unnatural Edited by Friend - 25 May 2013 at 11:00am
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philippejugnet Commander Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459	Posted: 25 May 2013 at 11:17am
	decided to remove the gun~~ In the final stages already ;D edit: just read your comment friend ill try to read a little bit about it, i wasnt sure about the arm, since you meantioned im going to change it :) edit: from your critique, this is what I changed, idk what is wrong with the arm but doesnt look good, ill make another edit with the changes in the arm arm edit: guess this looks way better :D just have to fix some of the AA and some shapes :) Edited by philippejugnet - 25 May 2013 at 11:48am
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skittle Commander Joined: 20 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 350	Posted: 25 May 2013 at 2:20pm
	Oh boy... you work fast. This is looking pretty awesome though! Definitely gonna fav this when it's done.
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philippejugnet Commander Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459	Posted: 26 May 2013 at 6:59am
	calling it done friends :) link
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