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HugoZanin
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Quote HugoZanin Replybullet Topic: Little Autumn Environment
    Posted: 16 July 2013 at 10:08pm
Hello, Pjers! How are you doing today?

I'm new to the pixel art, and this time I've tried to make something picture-based, and I think it's too noisy, but I simply don't know how to fix it.



Based on this filthy and disgusting beautiful photo:


(Sorry, it was from a russian site, so I couldn't find the photographer)

So, I hope that you can help me! Tnx!
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Quote StepDragon Replybullet Posted: 17 July 2013 at 9:21am
For the size of the canvas you're working on, I think its very well done. I'm not the best at really small images so I don't have any crit just yet.

You have some good things going there. You might be to the point where you can expand to a larger canvas.. Not huge mind you, but maybe double the current size, and see how you handle the shapes then.

Once again, well done with the amount of detail in such a small space. Its hard to make things less noisy and also get it to read the way you want.
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Quote dpixel Replybullet Posted: 17 July 2013 at 10:10am
I agree this is well done for the size.  I had to play around a bit though.

I tried to make it a bit more dramatic with an added darker red and adding a bit more contrast here and there.  Also blended in a darker blue near the top.

hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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Quote HugoZanin Replybullet Posted: 18 July 2013 at 8:51pm
Heya, pals! I really don't know how I can thank you two! It's really motivating to see this kind of comment in a WIP :D

First, StepDragon, I appreciate your attempt to help me in something that isn't exactly your business! And now I see how a larger canvas could have made it easier to do and even prettier do see :) However, this time I'm trying to make something very tiny, so this way I can improve the way I pixelate things: it's still difficult for me to draw in a "minimal" style, so it's like a challenge to me :D

dpixel, I loved the changes that you have made there, and the two new colors have just completed the vivacity that the original lacked :D

By the way, dpixel, sorry to ask you about this, but now the work is ready, I can simply send it to the gallery indicating your colaboration or there are another rules that I must follow?

Thank you again for the feedback! Have a good week :D
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Quote dpixel Replybullet Posted: 19 July 2013 at 6:46am
Glad you liked the edit.  You don't have to mention me at all, unless you post my edit exactly.  Even then it doesn't matter to me.  I just liked your image and threw my 2 cents in.  Plus I just like to pixel and thought I could add another perspective.
hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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Quote HugoZanin Replybullet Posted: 19 July 2013 at 3:00pm
Thank you again, dpixel! I sent the pixel to the gallery, and now it's waiting approval :D
Cited your contribution, to - It wouldn't hurt to copy/paste a link, and I feel more confortable for giving you some credits :D
Have a good day!

Edited by HugoZanin - 19 July 2013 at 3:01pm
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