Pixel Joint Forum: [Flash 8] Anime Style Portrait

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Sythius
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Topic: [Flash 8] Anime Style Portrait
Posted: 14 July 2006 at 9:46am

Tell me what you think.
I know the teeth are screwed up.
This took..... 1.30 hours.

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Souly
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 9:48am

Ewww jpeg.
I don't like the mouth at all.

It's the wrong color, and the teeth aren't in perspective.

I am the jesus of PJ.

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Sythius
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 9:58am

Ok.... sheesh...
And was there ANYTHING you liked 'bout it?
Cus it doesn't seem it since all you mention was what was hugely messed up,. -.-

Edit1:
Do I have a aura 'round me that attracts people to say what they don't like 'bout it or something?

Cus on everything I've submitted no one has ever said 'Oh I like ---- bit' etc, it's always '---it's ment to be like ----, ---- is to small' etc.

Edited by Sythius - 14 July 2006 at 10:01am

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Skull
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:03am

The left side of the hair looks much to long.. And if it wasn't anime styled I'd be combing my hair with the shine from that ginormous forehead.

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alkaline
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:07am

Originally posted by Sythius

Ok.... sheesh...
And was there ANYTHING you liked 'bout it?
Cus it doesn't seem it since all you mention was what was hugely messed up,. -.-

Edit1:
Do I have a aura 'round me that attracts people to say what they don't like 'bout it or something?

Cus on everything I've submitted no one has ever said 'Oh I like ---- bit' etc, it's always '---it's ment to be like ----, ---- is to small' etc.

We're not saying your work is no good, actually quite the contrary. We're giving effort to try and help you so you can improve your work even more. It may just come off as a tad bit cold and mean, but really we don't mean any harm to your work. We live off of improvement here. That's why we post our work.

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Shark
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:08am

Systius dont put urself down. Seriously the things he didnt like all need fixing, but apart from that.. its better than most could do...

Perhaps some of those big-assed shiney anime eyes would be a nice touch.

Snark, we love yuu.

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Sythius
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:12am

It would be nice if someone occassionally actually said something 'bout my work though....

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Sythius
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:40am

Ok...very off topic, but I realised that, that port isn't even that good for me... [goodish...but not good...]
so i'm trying to gather up some of my better work from other forums, here's what I got so far...

http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=laststand4zv.swf

Sorry for double post ^^;

Edited by Sythius - 14 July 2006 at 10:39am

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Aleiav
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:49pm

Originally posted by Sythius

It would be nice if someone occassionally actually said something 'bout my work though....

I personally don't feel like anyone has to mention anything nice about someone's work. Sure, it can be encouraging, but it's not a must. When you ask for creative critique you get it. It's not mean because it's not meant personally at all. If you want 5 pages of "omg that's kawaiii!!" I'd suggest going to a dolling forum.

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Sythius
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 2:14pm

Dude, Did I ever say I wanted 5 pages of priase?...
NO... Sheesh.

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Aleiav
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 3:14pm

Did I say you said you wanted 5 pages of praise? No. It was an exaggeration for example.

I don't see why you're always so standoffish about criticism. There's no point in doing anything creative if you aren't willing to accept that other people are going to criticise it.

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Ensellitis
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 3:33pm

Originally posted by Sythius

Dude, Did I ever say I wanted 5 pages of priase?...
NO... Sheesh.

THIS is why i dont post on your threads. People arent always going to say good things about your work, you were asking for crits. Learn to take the comments, crits, and suggestions.

Until you can take them, no comments from me about your work.

ಠ_ಠ
There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.

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Shark
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 4:26pm

lol .... gallery is for praise, forum for critique.

Snark, we love yuu.

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Bryan24
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Posted: 18 July 2006 at 3:57pm

Why are you even posting this?

This isn't even pixel art.

Do you have any idea why this site is called "Pixel Joint,"

its because of the pixel art!

Revive the bannana thread,
and keep the pomegrantate thread!
P.S.The bannana thread is supposed to not make sense.
P.S.S.or dollars

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Skull
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Posted: 19 July 2006 at 12:21am

Originally posted by Bryan24

Why are you even posting this?

This isn't even pixel art.

Do you have any idea why this site is called "Pixel Joint,"

its because of the pixel art!

Oh, don't do that.. It's been brought up... and He's left the site now..

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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 21 July 2006 at 6:45pm

It looks to americanized(how ironic see sig). Well it just seems that flas breeds perspective errors. It just needs some refinement. Move ears up,fix mouth, nose right eye. Keep going we don't want to be downers leave that to the sedatives and boos.

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Sythius Midshipman Joined: 03 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Topic: [Flash 8] Anime Style Portrait Posted: 14 July 2006 at 9:46am
	Tell me what you think. I know the teeth are screwed up. This took..... 1.30 hours.
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 9:48am
	Ewww jpeg. I don't like the mouth at all. It's the wrong color, and the teeth aren't in perspective.
	I am the jesus of PJ.
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Sythius Midshipman Joined: 03 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 9:58am
	Ok.... sheesh... And was there ANYTHING you liked 'bout it? Cus it doesn't seem it since all you mention was what was hugely messed up,. -.- Edit1: Do I have a aura 'round me that attracts people to say what they don't like 'bout it or something? Cus on everything I've submitted no one has ever said 'Oh I like ---- bit' etc, it's always '---it's ment to be like ----, ---- is to small' etc. Edited by Sythius - 14 July 2006 at 10:01am
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:03am
	The left side of the hair looks much to long.. And if it wasn't anime styled I'd be combing my hair with the shine from that ginormous forehead.

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alkaline Commander Joined: 25 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 868	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:07am
	*Originally posted by Sythius* Ok.... sheesh... And was there ANYTHING you liked 'bout it? Cus it doesn't seem it since all you mention was what was hugely messed up,. -.- Edit1: Do I have a aura 'round me that attracts people to say what they don't like 'bout it or something? Cus on everything I've submitted no one has ever said 'Oh I like ---- bit' etc, it's always '---it's ment to be like ----, ---- is to small' etc. We're not saying your work is no good, actually quite the contrary. We're giving effort to try and help you so you can improve your work even more. It may just come off as a tad bit cold and mean, but really we don't mean any harm to your work. We live off of improvement here. That's why we post our work.
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:08am
	Systius dont put urself down. Seriously the things he didnt like all need fixing, but apart from that.. its better than most could do... Perhaps some of those big-assed shiney anime eyes would be a nice touch.
	Snark, we love yuu.
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Sythius Midshipman Joined: 03 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:12am
	It would be nice if someone occassionally actually said something 'bout my work though....
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Sythius Midshipman Joined: 03 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 10:40am
	Ok...very off topic, but I realised that, that port isn't even that good for me... [goodish...but not good...] so i'm trying to gather up some of my better work from other forums, here's what I got so far... http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=laststand4zv.swf Sorry for double post ^^; Edited by Sythius - 14 July 2006 at 10:39am
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:49pm
	*Originally posted by Sythius* It would be nice if someone occassionally actually said something 'bout my work though.... I personally don't feel like anyone has to mention anything nice about someone's work. Sure, it can be encouraging, but it's not a must. When you ask for creative critique you get it. It's not mean because it's not meant personally at all. If you want 5 pages of "omg that's kawaiii!!" I'd suggest going to a dolling forum.
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Sythius Midshipman Joined: 03 July 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 2:14pm
	Dude, Did I ever say I wanted 5 pages of priase?... NO... Sheesh.
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 3:14pm
	Did I say you said you wanted 5 pages of praise? No. It was an exaggeration for example. I don't see why you're always so standoffish about criticism. There's no point in doing anything creative if you aren't willing to accept that other people are going to criticise it.
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 3:33pm
	*Originally posted by Sythius* Dude, Did I ever say I wanted 5 pages of priase?... NO... Sheesh. THIS is why i dont post on your threads. People arent always going to say good things about your work, you were asking for crits. Learn to take the comments, crits, and suggestions. Until you can take them, no comments from me about your work.
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 4:26pm
	lol .... gallery is for praise, forum for critique.
	Snark, we love yuu.
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Bryan24 Midshipman Joined: 21 September 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 3:57pm
	Why are you even posting this? This isn't even pixel art. Do you have any idea why this site is called "Pixel Joint," its because of the pixel art!
	Revive the bannana thread, and keep the pomegrantate thread! P.S.The bannana thread is supposed to not make sense. P.S.S.or dollars
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 19 July 2006 at 12:21am
	*Originally posted by Bryan24* Why are you even posting this? This isn't even pixel art. Do you have any idea why this site is called "Pixel Joint," its because of the pixel art! Oh, don't do that.. It's been brought up... and He's left the site now..

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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 21 July 2006 at 6:45pm
	It looks to americanized(how ironic see sig). Well it just seems that flas breeds perspective errors. It just needs some refinement. Move ears up,fix mouth, nose right eye. Keep going we don't want to be downers leave that to the sedatives and boos.

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