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Quote thesalus Replybullet Topic: Box made with blocks without locks
    Posted: 09 December 2006 at 2:22pm


First is a [more] complete version. Second is the opening animation I'm working on. Pretty simple. But I haven't done a lot of isometric stuff or animations - so I put two and two together and got five.

Not sure if the animation should be split into 4 frames instead.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 3:41pm
Very, very good. Maybe I frame added between frames 1 & 2.
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 5:20pm

it could use a fancy lock, but otherwise - great job ^___^

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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 5:42pm
awwww...no treasure....
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Quote thesalus Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 9:32pm


A plain wooden interior would have been boring [and more work ;p], so I put down a blue cloth.

Tis a dainty flower.

As for the treasure... that roguish pirate penguin ran off with it!
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Quote MiDiaN Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 10:05pm
cool stuff... imo I think the animation is a bit too fast.

edited the speed a bit... maybe more like this?



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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 10 December 2006 at 7:42am

Some Ideas...

  • Make the cloth red! 
  • Add a lock and a hinge. 
  • Maybe put some treasure inside? (Please?)
  • Make the beginning of the animation slow, and then make it faster at the end. This will give a more realistic feel.
  • On frame 2 of the opening sequence, the gold trim seems a little... much.
  • Here is what I'd do to fix it...

Well thats it, I guess.

 

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Quote thesalus Replybullet Posted: 10 December 2006 at 3:40pm
I should get around to adding treasure, but I want to finish the box first. :p [And that means I would have to add a lock. Like a little box with holes for a lamb.]

Tried to give it a more velvety feel [and made it red], although I am loathe to dither. Not sure if a hinge would be visible though. Slowed it down a bit too.



Now I'm having doubts as to whether I improved it or... disproved it. One Man Wrecking Machine.

So here's what I was working on today:

5 separate cameo-things. only 2 of which I am satisfied with. if you can name all five, awesome.


Edited by thesalus - 10 December 2006 at 7:11pm
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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 10 December 2006 at 7:18pm
Still working on your treasure box? Heres yet another edit that you can... whatever. Have fun!
 

Edited by BlackDragon - 10 December 2006 at 7:22pm
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Quote Fool Replybullet Posted: 11 December 2006 at 5:19am
Cool box=) I would just add some bouncing effect and define inside volume a bit.
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Quote Zetabot Replybullet Posted: 11 December 2006 at 8:18am

I gotta say that Blackdragon and Fool hit exactly what I was thinking. Dragon's "ye olde gold" was great, and the bounce on Fool's closing edit is equally fantastic.

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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 11 December 2006 at 8:25am
Heheheh nice one Fool!!! I love it.
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Quote thesalus Replybullet Posted: 11 December 2006 at 8:04pm
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How's that?

Tried making it a deeper red and fixing the shadows. And made it bounce a bit (stole one of your frames if that's okay :p). Added some gems to the treasure.

Edit: repositioned the treasure a bit. see if that's better. and thanks. although I can only take less than partial credit for that. thanks to everyone who critiqued.


Edited by thesalus - 11 December 2006 at 10:02pm
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 11 December 2006 at 9:25pm
Awesome looking with the bounce. The gems really add to it too.
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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2006 at 6:53am
My pleasure. Are you going to submit this?
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Quote ceddo Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2006 at 7:18am
Ahh this looks great :)
Although the first version was good too, this one if far more pleasing to the eye. love it!
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Quote Zetabot Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2006 at 12:37pm
Looks really nice now. Like Jalonso said, loving the jewels. They really accent it.
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Quote Saint Minor Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2006 at 5:46pm
what program do you people use to animate it,

also that treause chest is awesome
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Quote thesalus Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2006 at 6:21pm
Thanks again to everyone who C&Ced. And I've submitted it. :p

I used a program called Animagic. yay for trials. And MSPaint.
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