Pixel Joint Forum: WIP: Hot dog..... needs help

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   IV got this hotdog i started in school and i duno if its any good..... well i mean yeah its good (i think) but needs a little bit of help. i was think maybe a shaddow but i cant reali get the right shape for the shaddow and was wondering if you had a few tips or if your could try it out yourself.

Tankx 

so here it is :

o yeah and im not to sure on how to use transparency yet :S ...soz

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Yoggii Seaman Joined: 28 November 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 38	Topic: WIP: Hot dog..... needs help Posted: 22 December 2006 at 4:02am
	IV got this hotdog i started in school and i duno if its any good..... well i mean yeah its good (i think) but needs a little bit of help. i was think maybe a shaddow but i cant reali get the right shape for the shaddow and was wondering if you had a few tips or if your could try it out yourself. Tankx so here it is : o yeah and im not to sure on how to use transparency yet :S ...soz
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Yoggii Seaman Joined: 28 November 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 38	Posted: 22 December 2006 at 8:37am
	come on pople........
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2995	Posted: 22 December 2006 at 8:43am
	Please don't save it as .jpg. If that's the only copy you've got, I might be willing to try to salvage it. It could use some more shading as well as fixing of form issues: the bun isn't 'canoe-shaped', but has openings as deep on the ends as in the middle.
	RPG is numberwang.
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 29 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 23 December 2006 at 8:42am
	Look at a hotdog, and look at what you've drawn. Is the bun really that big in comparison to the hot dog? It looks like you cut a loaf of bread and tried to shove a hot dog in the cut.
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