 | Active TopicsMembersCalendarSearchHelpRegisterLogin |
| Collaborations/Challenges | |
 Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : Collaborations/Challenges |
 Topic: CHALLENGE 2/2/2009: Clowns |
  |
| << Prev Page of 2 |
| Author | Message |
|
Hapiel
Commander 
Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2209 |
   Posted: 07 February 2009 at 2:05am |
|
Right now you have frowning eyebrows. Before you had eyebrows like this
^ which makes him more evil than angry. I guess thats a problem. Also, give him a smile. Even the paint does not make him smile. Smile and some evil eyes together are very evil :) |
|
 IP Logged |
|
|
Photocopier
Midshipman 
Joined: 09 October 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 40 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 2:53am |
|
I'd say more shadows around the eyes, under the brow and from the hat. also make the mouth more of a lear.
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Ergg
Seaman 
Joined: 04 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 6:16am |
|
I don't know if i will manage to finish it. But I'll intend to :
 Edited by Ergg - 07 February 2009 at 6:30am |
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Antiboton
Midshipman
Joined: 10 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 8:13am |
|
Originally posted by skeddles Keep going adam ^^  He kinda lost his evil expression. How do I fix? Maybe closing his eyes a little... more in the middle And marking the lines below his nose. The ones that connect mouth and nose. Edited by Antiboton - 07 February 2009 at 8:16am |
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Opacus
Commander
Joined: 01 November 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 328 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 9:03am |
|
Here's mine so far. Haven't joined in on the fun for far too long. I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green:
 EDIT: Damn, just thought that I need to use the entire pallete. I'm not gonna use them a whole lot though EDIT 2: Here's an update with all colours.  Edited by Opacus - 07 February 2009 at 12:22pm |
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
skeddles
Commander
Joined: 14 November 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 531 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:04pm |
 I think I got the evil back. I hope. I like how many of these clowns are evil. Edited by skeddles - 07 February 2009 at 3:05pm |
|
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Metaru
Commander
Joined: 23 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3254 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:10pm |
|
Originally posted by Opacus I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green I see what you did there. |
|
 I ate leel's babies
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Hapiel
Commander
Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2209 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:23pm |
|
Originally posted by Metaru Originally posted by Opacus I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green I see what you did there. xD |
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Souly
Commander
Joined: 25 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2449 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:51pm |
 Okay so uh... I went to a blank canvas with the colors and went to work. Completely forgetting I was supposed to do a clown... So many changes were made among a perspective fix and a few other things. The clown was like the last thing I did, so I don't know if I should submit it. |
|
I am the jesus of PJ. |
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Opacus
Commander
Joined: 01 November 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 328 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 4:01pm |
|
Originally posted by Metaru Originally posted by Opacus I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green I see what you did there. Not following you. |
|
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Adam
Midshipman
Joined: 05 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 83 |
Posted: 07 February 2009 at 6:59pm |
|
@Souly: that scene is fantastic. Tough the clown takes away a bit, it's awesome overall. That tree is one of your best works.
@skeddles: Considering techniques it's great as expected from you, but the proportions are a bit dissonant.
My piece is not improving the way I planned so I just quit this challenge, and post my last WIP here:
 |
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
King of Games
Midshipman
Joined: 23 May 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 42 |
Posted: 08 February 2009 at 1:20am |
|
skeddles: I think his eye is too big and his arm is too small, makes him look like a little boy, you know?
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
| << Prev Page of 2 |
| |
||
Forum Jump |
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |
|
