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Quote dpixel Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 11:54am
I could say maybe some shading on the face and the coat.  And how about opening that coat a little too?  Give us a hint of what else she has on under there. 
hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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Quote DeProgrammer Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 12:18pm
Haha. Yeah, I planned on shading it once my assailants--I mean, critics--were satisfied.   Making the coat open might be a challenge... I'll try it, I guess. (This really isn't looking good.)
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Quote orenshtiv Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 12:20pm
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Sooo...


What next? (I'm not getting rid of the trench coat. It's one of my trademarks! Besides, the female version of me I made in City of Heroes looked female, and she had short hair, a fedora, and a trench coat!)

nice! now it looks great! :D
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 12:31pm
isn't this the same as the he-she challenge?

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Quote DeProgrammer Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 12:38pm
Not exactly. The he-she challenge required you to use a famous character, and with different dimensions/colors. It also didn't allow animation.


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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 2:41pm
Too bad you already did yourself yes ;)
(but 'she' could use an update :D)
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Quote MagicKoi Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 5:30pm
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Quote tenentenen Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 6:06pm
Ok, so this is my wip, there will be a body eventually too. im having a tough time with the hair shading. any c&c?




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Quote r1k Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 8:27pm
@rk1:  Looks real good.  Just that right knee looks like it has some sort of bone disease.


ha, ya.  I was trying to have the leg get bigger to have it coming closer to the viewer but It didnt work out right, Ill post I more refined line art in a bit.
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Quote DeProgrammer Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2009 at 9:35pm
Okay, one more for today! It really doesn't look good, and I don't think I'm going to keep going with this modification. :P



That's right...nothing underneath the trench coat, as per the image at the top of this comic. :P
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Quote r1k Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 12:21am
thats looking alot better so far deprogrammer, but I cant help but feel her body is too narrow for her head.

anyways heres an update on mine

lower half is still rough cause Im still not too sure on it.  Face it rough too, not sure how Im going to do the face really.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 1:02am
Would the girl - you really show that much of herself?
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Quote crow Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 5:39am
100% better but still not perfect
 
the legs look a little off balanced move them 1 or 2 px to the left
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Quote DeProgrammer Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 6:00am
I moved them two pixels to the left the last time someone said that, back on the 16th... :P Well, the left leg is already farther to the left than in my reference (according to the curve of that part of the trench coat, anyway), but the right one may not be far enough left yet.

And yes, her body is too narrow for her head. That one's purposeful. >.>

(If it's 100% better, does that mean it's OldQuality + 100% = NewQuality, which means the old quality was less than 0% if the new quality is less than 100%...or does it mean it's 200% of its original quality?)


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Quote r1k Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 3:14pm
little bit further

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Quote cthulhu Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 6:49pm



Edited by cthulhu - 19 September 2009 at 12:39pm
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Quote skamocore Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 7:16pm
Just keep in mind that we are talking about a full-bofy image here.
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Quote cthulhu Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2009 at 8:30pm
Oh, crap...
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Quote SilverSpirit Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 4:01am
Done!

this is MissComunication , a girly version of myself that lives inside my head





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Quote orenshtiv Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 11:19am
Originally posted by r1k

little bit further


i think ur revealing too much here,but nice,and i think the mouth should be smaller :P
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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 11:59am
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Don't look at her hands yet ;D


Who's looking at the hands..  ?!
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 12:51pm
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Don't look at her hands yet ;D


Originally posted by Skull

Who's looking at the hands..  ?!


Who's NOT looking at the rules :|
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Quote orenshtiv Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 2:07pm
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i think her head is too long,


Edited by orenshtiv - 19 September 2009 at 2:07pm
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Quote SilverSpirit Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 2:27pm
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Quote orenshtiv Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 3:26pm
smk, add some clouds xD
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Quote smk Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2009 at 4:38pm
Damn jalonso, you're right ><...

I'll just make a bandage, blood all over it, so that my female counter-part has severed-off legs ;D?

EDIT: Seriously though, don't worry I have a back-up plan

THANKS FOR NOTICING!

PS. Can't add clouds, because they would diver the attention back to the hands ;D

EDIT:



Fixed Jal honey.

And btw, if someone wants to see how I look like (work safe):
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Quote DeProgrammer Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 7:18am
Any more crits I haven't dismissed?


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Quote orenshtiv Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 8:31am
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Any more crits I haven't dismissed?



i think you can add more sadows on the *face :P


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Quote SilverSpirit Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 9:01am
Originally posted by DeProgrammer

Any more crits I haven't dismissed?




I think the eye should be more down , and that  it's hard to understand that the hand it pointing at you , something wrong with it ... I don't know . other than that it's cool .
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Quote Kren Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 2:30pm
how about opening the trench coat and showing some coconuts ;)? 
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Quote DeProgrammer Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 2:36pm
I did. They don't show very well.
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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 3:07pm
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Originally posted by smk




Don't look at her hands yet ;D


Originally posted by Skull

Who's looking at the hands..  ?!


Who's NOT looking at the rules :|


Wait, I don't get it. What rule was that breaking? o_O

edit:

Oh, wait. Full body, right?


Edited by greenraven - 20 September 2009 at 3:07pm
"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso   
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Quote DeProgrammer Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 3:07pm
It needed to be a full-body image according to the rules, Greenraven.
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Quote smk Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 3:19pm
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Wait, I don't get it. What rule was that breaking? o_O

edit:

Oh, wait. Full body, right?


Yeah, thank god Jal pointed that out in time!

Oh, btw, just finished my entry :3
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Quote AngelOTG Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 9:07pm
...why is every girl version of these guys a female whore? I think unless you posted a nude image of yourself you should not make nude women. D<

(Jk. All the pieces so far are wonderful. :D)
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Quote eghost Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2009 at 11:12pm
Gah...Not gonna have time to finish...I'll post mine in my gallery once I get it done...:/
Scrap that...I'll go ahead and post what I have...Not my best work by a longshot but I'll revisit it...


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Quote smk Replybullet Posted: 21 September 2009 at 11:19am
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...why is every girl version of these guys a female whore? I think unless you posted a nude image of yourself you should not make nude women. D<

(Jk. All the pieces so far are wonderful. :D)


Angel of the Death... was that a challenge? ;3
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