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Quote Ryona Replybullet Topic: Spooky Pixels...
    Posted: 22 October 2009 at 2:39am
...Well, maybe not so spooky.
 
I can't believe with how long I joined this place, this is the first work I'm posting here. haha
 
 
So, I was basicly bored last night and put this together.
 
I was playing a Gameboy ROM I had recently downloaded... CastleVania Legends. Thought it was cool because it's one of the few CastleVania games where the protagonist is a woman.
 
But I was really dissapointed with how much the game lacked in the "spookiness" factor. The backgrounds where all white, Like I was running around in a bright and sunny day. And nothing actually looked spooky at all. Surprisingly lame for the well-renowned CastleVania series.
 
I was like, "Hell, I could do better". So I tried!
 
I do enjoy working with the Gameboy style because I like the resolution size, and I like the challenge of working with only four tones.
 
Feel free to tell me what you think of it. Any ideas and suggestions are welcomed.
 
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UPDATE
 


Edited by Ryona - 24 October 2009 at 3:17am
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Quote Manupix Replybullet Posted: 22 October 2009 at 1:51pm
Very nice, but there are problems of readability I think: the char doesn't really stand out in front the bg, and the cloud behind the tree makes it look like a tree with leaves.
Addressed the first issue in the edit.
Good dithering textures!
Needs an owl in that tree...


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 23 October 2009 at 9:19pm
Loving this.
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Quote Pumpkinbot Replybullet Posted: 23 October 2009 at 10:00pm
*sniff**sniff* Is that a future Weekly Showcase piece I smell? :U
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Quote Ryona Replybullet Posted: 24 October 2009 at 1:46am
Thankies for the replies, guys. Most appreciated. ^_^
 
And thank you for the suggestions, Manupix! I totally get what you mean, and I got right on it. The owl is a fantastic idea too.
I decided to leave in the forest background though. I also touched up the fence.
 
So here it is... How is it now?
 
  


Edited by Ryona - 24 October 2009 at 3:18am
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Quote Manupix Replybullet Posted: 24 October 2009 at 5:27am
Much better! :)
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