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pipe
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Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
   Topic: Beach[WIP]Posted: 01 November 2009 at 3:57pm |
so I need help whit this one.The biggest problem is sea.I cant draw some wawes and it looks empty whitout wawes.Can someone draw me some to give me some idea? |
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Manupix
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Joined: 19 July 2009 Online Status: Online Posts: 281 |
Posted: 01 November 2009 at 5:50pm |
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The PJ search engine is your friend!
You might look for cliffs too, these are weird; and you need a horizon! And for some reason, it's an ugly jpeg... probably stupid imageshack's fault. |
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A.B. Lazer
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Joined: 21 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 155 |
Posted: 01 November 2009 at 6:29pm |
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That white lines pass as waves for me enough, but learning is always good.
On the other things: why rock on the foreground casts a shadow, and cliff not? And why trees in the background don't cast shadow? |
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pipe
Midshipman
Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
Posted: 02 November 2009 at 4:08am |
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Originally posted by A.B. Lazer
That white lines pass as waves for me enough, but learning is always good. On the other things: why rock on the foreground casts a shadow, and cliff not? And why trees in the background don't cast shadow? yeah I was going to fix that and I agree, cliffs are looking strange. @Manupix:What do you mean I need a horizon? Thanks all, I think I will finish it soon... Edited by pipe - 02 November 2009 at 4:13am |
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Manupix
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Joined: 19 July 2009 Online Status: Online Posts: 281 |
Posted: 03 November 2009 at 2:50pm |
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What I mean is you have a problem with perspective. I can't explain this in detail here. Either check the excellent wikipedia article about persp, or the little tutorial I just added to the 'noobtorials' thread.
In short, the tree line being sideways is unnatural. Either there is a horizon line behind it, or the trees are the horizon: should be horizontal. Also, the cliffs need a vanishing point. An edit would help, but I can't make one from where I post. Sorry. |
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Pumpkinbot
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Joined: 05 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 79 |
Posted: 03 November 2009 at 5:42pm |
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Looks pretty good (besides JPG. Eew!), but I'd upload it to Photobucket. Imageshack is pure fail. x_o |
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pipe
Midshipman
Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
Posted: 04 November 2009 at 12:31pm |
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Originally posted by Manupix
What I mean is you have a problem with perspective. I can't explain this in detail here. Either check the excellent wikipedia article about persp, or the little tutorial I just added to the 'noobtorials' thread. In short, the tree line being sideways is unnatural. Either there is a horizon line behind it, or the trees are the horizon: should be horizontal. Also, the cliffs need a vanishing point. An edit would help, but I can't make one from where I post. Sorry. yeah now I see what you mean.Thank you again.I will finish this work later cause I want to focus on weekly challenge now. @Pumkinbot:Yes Imageshack is piece of sh*t I accidently used it this time. |
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