Onyx
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 June 2026 at 3:56pm
Topic: Onyx
Posted By: H|F
Subject: Onyx
Date Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:57pm
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My character Virus Onyx  know her body needs work, her arm looks short and her shoulder odd, any other CC at this point? I really want this to look good. I tend to always make the same mistakes when it comes to anatomy
 It's like my eyes don't realize.Her eyes are a bit "upturned" but I hope it looks good that way?
Oh and I think I will downsize that HUGE bow.
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Posted By: Mngwa
Date Posted: 25 April 2012 at 11:03am
| I really have a problem with the eyes. It look that one of them is looking down and the other up. The shoulders should be both the same size, but one is small and the other is big. Even if it was perpective, the neck is in bad position, it should be more between shoulders. It is almost on the one of the shoulders now. You should change collarbones too, they look odd and the chest looks more like back. Wow, so much critics .. but feedback is always good, isn't it. It can help you to get better. |
Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 25 April 2012 at 11:38am
| I agree with Mngwa, but I want to point out specifically that it's the way the eyes are looking, not their shape, that is off. Mngwa said it too, just wanted to be clear since you were asking about it. |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 25 April 2012 at 12:24pm
| I dunno, they have a pretty extreme diagonal/slanted shape. Hand looks small, head's probably a little big for the body |
Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 25 April 2012 at 3:20pm
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I think the eyes are ok. I think she needs a more defined cheekbone and more of a left shoulder.
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Posted By: Mngwa
Date Posted: 25 April 2012 at 7:28pm
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Originally posted by dpixel I think the eyes are ok. I think she needs a more defined cheekbone and more of a left shoulder. You must be joking. I wouldn't want such eyes for sure .. he should repair just those pupils which look in different directions. |
Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 26 April 2012 at 3:33am
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Originally posted by Mngwa Originally posted by dpixel I think the eyes are ok. I think she needs a more defined cheekbone and more of a left shoulder. You must be joking. I wouldn't want such eyes for sure .. he should repair just those pupils which look in different directions. I never said the eyes are perfect, but they don't bother me as much as other things. Besides, I recognize her style and the eyes are consistent. ------------- |
Posted By: H|F
Date Posted: 29 April 2012 at 7:44pm
also, a wip I haven't worked on in too long
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