Girl and Soldier WIP.
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
Printed Date: 24 May 2013 at 1:20pm
Topic: Girl and Soldier WIP.
Posted By: Lehmure
Subject: Girl and Soldier WIP.
Date Posted: 09 June 2012 at 10:43am
Hello sirs.First, sorry for the bad english.
Well, this is the two WIPs who i am doing. ._.
The girl lineart(Made by me, horay):
And the version almost finished:
Posted By: onek
Date Posted: 09 June 2012 at 11:59am
the shading on the girl doesnt work at all.
it just looks like random patches of color and isnt defining an volume at all.
set ur lightsource, for instance, on the right side... try to 'feel' ur volumes and sculpt them with light and shadow... highlights facing towards the light, shadows away...
i dont get wats going on with the face... the circly thingy is the nose? that line under it the mouth?
i looks kinda awkward as is...
also the arms look like they are cut off
the should be at least three time longer... maybe she got them behind her back, but still it doesnt work...