Bunch of guys runnin right
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Printed Date: 10 June 2026 at 8:10am
Topic: Bunch of guys runnin right
Posted By: Fobwashed
Subject: Bunch of guys runnin right
Date Posted: 29 June 2012 at 6:31pm
I'm makin this for fun, was wondering if anyone had any C&C. I'll have to make a couple more passes on things like hair and then I'm gonna try getting to work on a BG. I think the guy in the blue shirt looks like he's a bit off from the way the rest look so I'll prob have to fix him up a bit as well.
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Posted By: nivek
Date Posted: 29 June 2012 at 7:19pm
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Those look alright. I hope you're going to animate them, or have them all in a scene. I Think they'll look pretty good in a game.
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Posted By: Mr.Fahrenheit
Date Posted: 29 June 2012 at 7:27pm
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I think you have a few of very similar shades. If you remove them it will likely be better.
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Posted By: Fobwashed
Date Posted: 29 June 2012 at 11:38pm
I don't think I could animate them because it'd be too much work -_-;;
They're based off real people so I sorta need the variety of shades to try to depict them in this small space. Which shades are you talking about? In the faces or clothing?
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Posted By: jeremy
Date Posted: 29 June 2012 at 11:41pm
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To make them more readable, consider increasing contrast and reducing single-pixel detail (i.e. clusters instead) outside of things like eyes.
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Posted By: DoctorDRG
Date Posted: 30 June 2012 at 10:45am
I understand you're working on a background, but while you work on the characters it might be a good idea to work on a more neutral coloured canvas, as you have some whites and greys that get lost. ;)
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Posted By: Fobwashed
Date Posted: 30 June 2012 at 11:15am
I tried to reduce some of the really similar colors a bit.
I flip on and off a solid color bg layer while I work. I'm still not positive on what I want to use for a BG but I'm worried that whatever I do, it'll clutter up the characters.
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Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 01 July 2012 at 11:50am
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This looks like great fun. Too bad you are not interested to make it into a game, but I understand it would be a lot of work. I just think you show much talent here, both in concept/design and execution.
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Posted By: Fobwashed
Date Posted: 02 July 2012 at 6:51pm
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I'm making a game. Just not based on these guys -_-;;
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Posted By: ollantaytambo
Date Posted: 02 July 2012 at 11:40pm
Posted By: Fobwashed
Date Posted: 03 July 2012 at 12:03am
Still adding -_-;; When will it stop!?
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Posted By: ollantaytambo
Date Posted: 03 July 2012 at 12:04am
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lol at the DC character, also are they really racing to the couch
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Posted By: AirStyle
Date Posted: 03 July 2012 at 12:08am
One serious version of musical chairs.
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Posted By: Gavralcraw
Date Posted: 03 July 2012 at 12:13am
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Great work! Not sure what's going on with floating guys pants.
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Posted By: Vell123
Date Posted: 11 August 2012 at 1:29pm
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This does look great. DUDE MAKE A GAME MAKE A GAME LOL I'LL PROGRAM FOR YOU!!! SERIOUS
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Posted By: Delerat
Date Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:26pm
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Oh man I can pick out all the old Whiskey Media guys from this easily. Really impressive! Is your other game Lincoln Force? :P
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