Female humanoid cat (WIP)
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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: Female humanoid cat (WIP)
Posted By: LachieD
Subject: Female humanoid cat (WIP)
Date Posted: 29 July 2012 at 9:07am
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Want to upload this to pixeljoint, but I want to get the best version there, so any feedback on the current version would help a lot:
Progress: 
Latest stage: 
Happy with what I started and with what I got now. Reference: http://www.vectorjungle.com/2008/11/woman-with-arms-crossed/ - http://www.vectorjungle.com/2008/11/woman-with-arms-crossed/ Thanks for CC in advance! |
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Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 1:04pm
Hopefully an improvement.
Ready for PixelJoint gallery? |
Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 1:53pm
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Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 1:57pm
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Thanks, but could you pick a small part of the picture and edit it correctly to illustrate my mistakes more clearly.
I would not agree though that dark edges are WRONG as a rule. |
Posted By: Catghost
Date Posted: 01 August 2012 at 1:36pm
Ah, cat girls. One of my favorite subjects! Interesting design too.
Just a quick edit. I noticed that there were very dark lines in some places, but none at all in others, which made it seem kind of inconsistent in that regard. I think defining the edges a bit more would help, if that's the style you're going for. Also, there is a bit of a lack in depth, especially on the face. Using more shadows would help the overall look of the peice I think, right now it looks kind of beveled and not dimensional. But it is a good start, good luck with the finished piece. 
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Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 01 August 2012 at 2:55pm
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Thanks for your suggestions. Good edits on the collar, but I was unable to effectively apply them on the latest version of my work. It went somewhat in other direction. Nice work on the clothes. Maybe with my next space cat I can take care more of that.
Lastest version (tried to add some 3rd dimension to the face):  
Goes to my gallery. |
Posted By: Catghost
Date Posted: 01 August 2012 at 6:07pm
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That looks a lot better, well done. I like the darker/more orange colors you used as well.
Looking forward to seeing more space cats as well. :D |
Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 02 August 2012 at 3:25pm
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Shadows checkered give unwanted texture of asphalt
Тени шашечками дают нежелательную фактуру асфальта |
Posted By: H|F
Date Posted: 03 August 2012 at 2:14am
For me what stands out is the way the light hits her "shirt" Also, she doesn't seem to have anything that screams she is a girl other then her breast. I think her face could be a bit more attractive. Her hand looks very large.... don't think she would be comfortable holding her arms that way because her "size"
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Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 03 August 2012 at 2:05pm
Small update:
Not sure how much I'm ready to change the design of the face. It is what is is. |