Travelling Trapinch
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 June 2026 at 1:23am
Topic: Travelling Trapinch
Posted By: Exxo
Subject: Travelling Trapinch
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 12:29pm
So I thought I'd search the forum after not being here for quite a while. philippejugnet's "Valley of kings" inspired me to pixel again, so I thought I'd make something. Taking a break for now. I haven't really pixelled a lot of scenery before, so I thought I might as well get some feedback. |
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Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 1:10pm
On the left side a lot of dark, on the right side a lot of accents. And anyway, I did some I can not say, so it feels good ... На левой стороне много тёмного, на правой стороне много акцентов. И вообще я ничего определённого не могу сказать, вроде всё нормально... |
Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 1:50pm
| I like the sun and the clouds in the background, but the rest is too unfinished to render a coherent critic. |
Posted By: Exxo
Date Posted: 01 August 2012 at 6:56pm
I worked more on the sky and cleaned up some lines. Still, I never made clouds before, so some tricks and tips is appreciated. |
Posted By: Exxo
Date Posted: 03 August 2012 at 6:15pm
Uh, yeah, tweeked some colours are fixed a few things. I still need help on this y'know. If I'm going to keep the colour count down to some degree, then I need to dither, but I'm awful at that. |
Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 03 August 2012 at 10:53pm
Rock behind of Trapinch should bend a little - or something to put in, and then a lot of empty space I allowed myself to make small changes in colors, that they were not as boring.. Скалу за Трапинчем надо немного искривить - или чтото туда поместить, а то много пустого пространства Я позволил себе сделать небольшие исправления в цветах, чтоб они не были такими скучными. |
Posted By: Daanvdk
Date Posted: 04 August 2012 at 8:13am
| Imo your edit kinda ruined the piece Yuran, I liked the old colors way better and your shading on the little guy takes away it's cute and cartoony look, which in my opinion was a good thing about him. |
Posted By: Exxo
Date Posted: 04 August 2012 at 11:02am
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Thanks a lot! I think I'll stick to the old colours, but I'll be using that as a template for some further shading, if that's alright o:
(oh and trapinches don't have noses) |