My apartment
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: The Joint
Forum Discription: Post your WIPs, ideas and anything else to do with the massive isometric apartment project.
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Printed Date: 19 June 2013 at 5:19am
Topic: My apartment
Posted By: wertler
Subject: My apartment
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 1:43am
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My apartment is too big to submit! how do you submit it?
Heres the pic!
http://imageshack.us/">
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Replies:
Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 3:31am
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Firstly, the background is black, and really should be transparent. Second.. what is going on? Looks like a rather simple edit. -------------  |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 5:28am
| He saw himself and his sister is confused |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:22am
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Needs plenty more work wertler, even if you do submit it i doubt it'll be accepted. You've used the template for the room, and the template for the people, with not much editing, and class it as your own. You really need to spend more time on it, making it original and interesting, and perhaps more obvious to what is going on. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 9:19am
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OK. Any ideas?
here's an update!
http://imageshack.us">
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 10:34am
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maybe you can re-work the walls to be original. Not just color wise.
maybe a plant or two. Different clothing on the non-clone character. A
floor rug. Know what I mean. Don't give up.
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Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:17am
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Update!
http://imageshack.us">
 could someone please make some shrubery for me. I'm not very good.
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:25am
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"A SHRUBBERY!!!"
lol. The point of the forum isn't really to do what you can't, rather, it's to improve what you can and ultimately enable you to do more. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:47am
| well is there a tutorial on how to make "A SHRUBBERY" |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 1:41pm
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The subtle message of my previous post read as follows:
"SHOW US WHAT YA HAVE AND LET US TELL YA HOW TO FIX THE DANG THING!"
Thank you for your time and the toll this surely took on your legally favorable mental state. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 12 July 2006 at 2:39pm
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I'm only starting at pixel work but I'll give it a try!
http://imageshack.us">
 I know I'm crap. I cant even draw 3d stuff!
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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:24am
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It's called, in this case, isometric. And for the record, that's nothing like a shubbery.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 13 July 2006 at 10:55am
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practice, practice, practice my friend. and patience young padawan, you too can be a jedi. :P Your apartment isn't bad, but all that's in it is a couple of people and some plants. Maybe add some stuff? Like some chairs or something? If he's cloned himself, you could make a mad scientist table with a bunch of potions! ------------- |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:06pm
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If he cloned himself he wouldn't say "Your me!" now would he? But still I'll try. |
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:12pm
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no.. he'd say "you're me!" as in "you are" as not in "your" as in the possessive form of saying something like "this is your balcony thread which will be closed soon if you don't begin trying to learn from your peers and update accordingly. It is my authority to do so if I don't see progress or if you continue to revive dead threads in the name of boredom" see how it works? ------------- |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 13 July 2006 at 2:35pm
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Here's an update
http://imageshack.us">
 and btw I always get confused with shrubberys. are they bushes
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Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:29am
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Are you allowed to double post? well if you aren't I didn't know.
Anyway do you like this better. she has a pink dress and there is a rug but no poster.
C&C
http://imageshack.us">
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:39am
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where is it ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:47am
| there |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:40pm
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The rug isn't on iso perspective at all. You need a tutorial on isometrics. http://rhysd.syntesis.org/tutorial/ - I'd suggest this one here.
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Posted By: alkaline
Date Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:44pm
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What did you do to your image quality? Anyways yes everything needs to be isometric, I would also suggest using less saturated colors and put in more detail.
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Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 14 July 2006 at 1:14pm
| wat about the other update? recognise the poster? |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 20 July 2006 at 11:22am
someone pleas say sumthing!!!!
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Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 20 July 2006 at 11:56am
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What's there left to say at the moment? I'd suggest you first do something with the crits you already got.
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Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 20 July 2006 at 12:38pm
| k ill try that |
Posted By: mike2590
Date Posted: 21 July 2006 at 12:59am
you should try to turn the "sister so that she is looking at her brother(s). this should be difficult, but you will get it.
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Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 21 July 2006 at 12:54pm
| Ìm probabley not gonna update for a while so ill ask again. in my update does any1 recignise the poster? |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 21 July 2006 at 10:57pm
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no one probably does. I don't see what difference it makes if someone does recognize it. Even if someone does recognize it, it doesn't make your piece any better. I'd work on the critiques and stop worrying about things like that. ------------- |
Posted By: Dra_chan
Date Posted: 24 July 2006 at 1:27pm
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Originally posted by wertler Are you allowed to double post? well if you aren't I didn't know. Anyway do you like this better. she has a pink dress and there is a rug but no poster.
C&C
http://imageshack.us"> The carpet should follow the floor's direction in the lines, otherwise it looks like it's floating. |
Posted By: wertler
Date Posted: 25 July 2006 at 3:51am
oh sorry!
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 25 July 2006 at 4:56am
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Originally posted by wertler
oh sorry! Lol, there's no need to say sorry. You should thank them for pointing it out to you and get to work on fixing it. ------------- http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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