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WIP: Hot dog..... needs help

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Topic: WIP: Hot dog..... needs help
Posted By: Yoggii
Subject: WIP: Hot dog..... needs help
Date Posted: 22 December 2006 at 4:03am
IV got this hotdog i started in school and i duno if its any good..... well i mean yeah its good (i think) but needs a little bit of help. i was think maybe a shaddow but i cant reali get the right shape for the shaddow and was wondering if you had a few tips or if your could try it out yourself.

Tankx


so here it is :




o yeah and im not to sure on how to use transparency yet :S ...soz



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Posted By: Yoggii
Date Posted: 22 December 2006 at 8:38am
come on pople........


Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 22 December 2006 at 8:44am
Please don't save it as .jpg. If that's the only copy you've got, I might be willing to try to salvage it.
 
It could use some more shading as well as fixing of form issues: the bun isn't 'canoe-shaped', but has openings as deep on the ends as in the middle.


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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 23 December 2006 at 8:43am
Look at a hotdog, and look at what you've drawn.

Is the bun really that big in comparison to the hot dog? It looks like you cut a loaf of bread and tried to shove a hot dog in the cut.

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