[WIP] - Challenge le Moustache c'est incroyable!
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Topic: [WIP] - Challenge le Moustache c'est incroyable!
Posted By: Club Beuker
Subject: [WIP] - Challenge le Moustache c'est incroyable!
Date Posted: 02 November 2009 at 5:34am

Again.. C&C highly welcome. I must say I'm not happy with the tophat yet..
Quick edit:

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Posted By: Club Beuker
Date Posted: 03 November 2009 at 2:47am
A new day.. a new edit (+bump, yes forgive me)

Lost the cloud, added a "funny" caption + banana peel.. yes yes the old banana peel joke...
15 colors so far.
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Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 03 November 2009 at 6:59am
Cute character, funny panel. You've got a good deal of banding going on on the character himself where he's in shadow--the dark outline hugging the line of light pixels. Honestly, I'd consider greatly reducing or eliminating as much outlining as you can. If you think about it, you don't really need it when you're making an entire scene.
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Posted By: Walrus
Date Posted: 03 November 2009 at 7:11am
thats a scene, not a portrait (i think), and the challenge asks for portraits... correct me if i am mistaken.
cute character, i dont realy like the blocky horizon thing...
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Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 03 November 2009 at 7:25am
woah, I didn't even notice this was for the challenge. even though challenge is in the topic...
Anyhoo! yeah, I think walrus is right :(
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Posted By: Club Beuker
Date Posted: 03 November 2009 at 7:26am
Crap! That's why I need the C&C hehe.
@Hatch: Check, but that problem will be solved since I need to make a portrait..
@Walrus: Check, I'm doing it over. Bye bye banana joke tho..
p.s. Or maybe I'm keeping it and skip the challenge this week 
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Posted By: Club Beuker
Date Posted: 03 November 2009 at 8:25am
Sorry for the bump, but after a few things were made clear. I'm happy to show you.. the new and slightly improved.. portrait!
*tadaaaa*

This is a portrait right..?
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 03 November 2009 at 10:41am
I would classify that as a portrait. I like it and even your first version that was not a portrait are cute and you should make something out of it. My only crit is that the mustache is not POPin enough for the challenge. Its fine if its not a challenge tho. Maybe the monocle can move left 1px ans the stache can be in the dark blue???
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Posted By: Club Beuker
Date Posted: 04 November 2009 at 3:00am
Like: Or:

Not sure if it's POPping enough now tho. I might enlarge it a bit, put some curls on the end. But I really like the facial expression it has right now.
And yea, those cute little men.. You'll be seeing a lot of them later on haha
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 04 November 2009 at 3:38am
Why so boring? Why so empty?
Why not do it like this?

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Posted By: Club Beuker
Date Posted: 04 November 2009 at 4:01am
I was thinking about enlarging it in total.. but that kinda is like cheating (yes I'm too lazy to start over and make it bigger pixel by pixel.
2X:

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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 04 November 2009 at 4:04am
Once you have a plan, it is really no work at all. Really. You could even resize the old on e and trace it. But it is worth it!
Don't be that lazy!
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Posted By: Club Beuker
Date Posted: 04 November 2009 at 5:48am
My lazyness tells me that the enlarged pic looks surprisingly good too..  I'll try to smoothen it out, but I'm not making any promises hehe
Just decided to drop out of the challenge and finish it as a scene. Liked it better the way it was. 
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 04 November 2009 at 6:42am
Don't!
The traditional moustache monocle tophat combination is way to funny for that!
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Posted By: Club Beuker
Date Posted: 04 November 2009 at 6:47am
Exactly, and that's why I'm dropping out and use the classical banana peel gag. It will be in the gallery Lollige.. Snap out of it!!
*and the oscar goes to...*
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