anne (UPDATED) :: Pixel Art Detail

Beautiful color, fav'd for study.

Ooh, this is nice.

This is pretty and I want that hat.

Colours have worked. Do a couple more pieces in that palette if you can! Simply because i like them and will be very upset if you don't ):

Anywhoooo. Keep up the good work!

Up another point, 7/7 now :P

Yeah, that's much nicer. Everything looks softer and more feminine now. I really like the amount of depth the simple image transpires.

thats pretty awesome

zoom 2x and it's a great avatar

ok i think i understand what you meant now so i've just fixed it and thanks again <:

Here is the edit.

I worked from the old version, because I liked it a bit better. Hopefully this'll give you a better idea. By the way, the colors are really nice!

Well, I don't know if I helped it or not. It was a quick job and I probably should've left it alone. XD

I tried...

I think you lost a bit of the character with the edits. The shape of the hair, as well as the area below the chin are the main areas affected. Also, it looks a little too faded out now. I'll try and do a little edit to show you what I meant. I think the combination of the two you have would work well.

WOW. I really adore those colors. Green for the win, baby! The one on the right is my favorite. <3

i like the first one better, but that is my opinion, but it still looks good

Yes the new one looks much for feminine! +1 point.

dopple, i took your advice and played around with the outlining and now i see what you mean about it. thanks :D

just like al your art, i like it, 5 point and fav!!!

Maybe some eyelashes would do the trick. When I look at her, she reminds me of elizabeth swann trying to be a guy pirate. She has an almost but, not quite enough, feminine look.

As for the colors. I like them all except the harsh outlines. I'm not a hater of dark outlines but for the color style you're going for, I don't think it works. Since the colors are light and washed out, I think the outlines should accentuate that. Maybe outlining the shapes with slightly darker shades of their respective colors would help.

That's my two cents. Overall it's very pleasing though.

opacus: yeah she is opening her mouth, so the jaw's shape is slightly changed to fit that which is why she probably looks male

i think she looks enough to be a girl as it is so yeah

Agreed, great to see you back in bussiness!
One thing: Anne? I wouldn't have been able to tell this was a girl if it werent for the name. She doesn't show any obvious feminine features atm.
The lips are something that can make her look slightly feminine, but currently the lips look more like she just has her mouth open. Nice colours certainly, reminds me a bit of Larwick.
Maybe you should make the hair a bit more straight or curly instead of this pointy style? Mostly the girls don't have it. Unless it's meant to be a bit of a boy-ish girl.

I dunno about the good in bed thing O_o...

glad to see you getting back into this fossil, your still excellent

(and good in bed)