Baal :: Pixel Art Detail

don't get discouraged. sometimes this happens but it doesn't mean that people is not interested. even When I try to post in every posible topic, a few slip unnoticed. in these cases, and only when your piece is deeply buried, you're allowed to bump your thread.

c'mon, post it there. i'lll give it a comment or two.

I tried several places (including here) but wasn't able to get enough crit. I'll probably delete this and try a bit later, once my current topic (Baal and Friends) gets bumped down far enough.

persona...

ain't that from Shadowrun?

in any case, i do strongly suggest you to take this to the WIP forums. its has a lot of potential, but these anatomy flaws are the ones that makes it fail.

Basically, I have a 'Persona Request Shop' on another forum, where I design a Persona for someone. So using the appearence of existing Personae from the Shin Megami Tensei series, I made this up from my head with no real references.
I could draw you a picture of what the character looks like in my head but it's basically the same thing, flaws and all, since I'm fail at anatomy.

most of the desing? what does that mean?

there are severe problems involving the lineart and its jaggyness, shadowing and anatomy in general. most because the character itself. if a reference was used, please provide in order to be able how the original desing is.