Very nice, I like what you did on the inside shading of the hair and the boobs. Keep it up ;D

thank you for the advices :)

it will be redrawn, so many things to fix! I'm glad I could have so much feedback about it!

Good sprite esp for a 1st! (except the jaggy hips and waist outlines)

But you're going the wrong way with the anim. You can't have a solid torso+neck+head, solid legs, and just shift them and hope it works... Each frame has to be redrawn!

At this point it may not be that urgent to add frames, rather concentrate on a good workflow (I guess that's what you mean by "doing the animation sketch").

Welcome, I'm expecting awesome stuff from you soon!

Completely don't like the legs, they almost lack of any curves. Otherwise nice.

yeah you're right.. the arm was bothering me too... I'll try to maintain a more constant thickness. Thank you for the advice! :)

heya thanks for commenting! I'll try adding more frames, I should have started doing the animation sketch before worring about finishing the art..

I agree. You need more frames to smooth out the animation, and maybe fix the way she suddenly grows muscles in her arm. Regardless, very good job on this.

Agreed. :)

More frames! Anyway, this is a pretty dang sexy first submission ;D