Hmm, I think it looks better aesthetically if it's indented to the right. I'll see if other people suggest the same thing before I change that.

 Right, I meant title screen too, sorry. 
This is what I mean about the "Press Start" convention in title screens

 This is actually the title screen, a la Mega Man. Also, I think I see what you mean with the pincers and all. I also realized yesterday I accidentally put some banding on this, which I will fix (sometime).

 this is fantastic!!
If it's a game's title screen, I think you should have the "Press Space" centered, and in the bottom part, under the ship.
In the "Press Space" area it could have a "by Pheno" text instead. The ship is really nice, the only issue I see  would be the pincers up front, the symmetry is just a bit off