It might be cool if all three eyes took turns winking, one at a time.

Nice dramatic angle! It might help the girl read better if you used a different main color for her dress than the one for the spotlight on the ground. Maybe a warmer hue?

Meatball beats scissors!

Love the colors and the atmosphere. The beer is especially well-realized.

The quivering uvula is a nice touch!

This is why you should always pick the red pill.

So much to love about this game! The obstacle clusters are fun and varied. The progression of the music over time lends a dynamic quality to the game. It's a nice design touch that as the player becomes increasingly injured, she falls closer to death, which not only heightens the tension, but also gives the player more room to anticipate approaching obstacles. The upgraded character wearing boxing gloves is also a nice touch.

It's an unfortunate design necessity that the player isn't initally fun to control. This issue may trigger prematurate judgment and the subsequent stoppage of play for some people.  The quick leveling ameliorates it somewhat, but it might play smoother if she started in a less hobbled state.

The foreground can muddy the action at times. I feel like the color forcing could have a more consistent direction behind it. For instance, the small coins are hard to spot and the skull-with-bow ornaments, while cute, ultimately add confusion to the midground (since the mushrooms are also red).

I appreciate the minimalistic approach, but it would be nice to see your distance progress (especially during any boring stretches).

Is it possible to win? I made it 690m.

I love the panoply of textures! Great detail and atmosphere. There are a few sharp edges (below the middle of the bottom step, the base of the first tree on the left), but those are easily overshadowed by the quality and craftsmanship inherent in the rest of the piece.

I checked out a gameplay video for this project. Are the sprites placeholders?

Nice work! It would be cool (but also a lot of work) if the knobs turned during the animation.

The navel is... oddly compelling.

I find the beret tree oddly compelling.

Love this! The high contrast on the facial features work well to attract the eye. The delay in the hair's movement gives it solid, believable weight. With this style, you can really showcase your animation talent without getting caught up with shading and AA. Well done!

Love the little faces and the smooth animation. I know it's cliche, but I wish it had a bite attack. Why else does it need them big chompers?

This reminds me of Raoul Duke's ravings about lizards. Great work!

I think I found Waldo!

He seems trustworthy.

This looks more dangerous than running with scissors!

I think there's too much empty space compared to the style for the rest of the art you've shown us. Why not put shingles on the roof? If the grass tiles are not WIP, they could use a lot more detail, too.

The store icons could be clearer if the silhouettes were made more distinct. The apple would read better if it had more of a stem. The left and right edges of the potion look fuzzy. I'm not sure what the last store sells. Balls?

You have a good start here. Nothing needs to be scrapped, just polished. The fronts of the stores look a bit flat, maybe add some shadows to imply depth. The cookie cutter bushes look very cartoon. It's definitely tough to keep everything on  the quality level of the awesome stone you drew for the dungeon, but it's worth trying!

The palette reminds me of EGA colors. Maybe it's the white skin and magenta dress. I like her attitude!

Nice colors! Feel free to hit me for this crit, but isn't there supposed to be a hyphen between "spider" and "man"? :D

This is really shaping up into something I want to play! The stone texture is so good, it dominates these mockups.

Quick crits:

It would be nice if the walls could use different values or something to pull them out from the floor.

The HUD is pretty generic -- there's nothing about it that says "fantasy world." Maybe some stone reliefs on medieval cathedrals would be a good source of inspiration for ornamentation.

The character is too cartoony to match the style of the rest of the mockup. He doesn't have the value range of the other objects (no black shadows to white highlights). As a result, he doesn't visually pop like he should.

Reminds me of that classic arcade game, "Rampage."

Love the personality you've captured at this scale!

Nice improvement! I think the inventory items pop better with the uniform solid backdrop. I can't decide if the items themselves are supposed to be flat. Their frontal angles and the drop shadows support that, but the rendering seems to describe more depth.

You have a good feel for the animation polish that makes a game exciting to play!

The mixture of warm and cool shades really makes the elements in this piece pop!