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   I've been working on this piece for about 5 hours total, but that was broken up over a series of days and weeks.

What do you guys think could be improved on?

Thanks

Edited by jwmollman - 24 May 2010 at 12:51pm

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JWM Seaman Joined: 01 April 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Topic: Simple City Posted: 24 May 2010 at 10:42am
	I've been working on this piece for about 5 hours total, but that was broken up over a series of days and weeks. What do you guys think could be improved on? Thanks Edited by jwmollman - 24 May 2010 at 12:51pm
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dpixel Commander Joined: 03 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 564	Posted: 03 June 2010 at 2:02pm
	How about some trees, parks and building signs. And be more creative with the building architecture.
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jhalmuri3521 Seaman Joined: 04 June 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 04 June 2010 at 5:13am
	Hm it is also nice However You can add few roads and passerby you can also add tree, park, and swimming pool......... when you will done it please show us Ex Display Digital Camera
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JWM Seaman Joined: 01 April 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 13 June 2010 at 5:54pm
	Okay I have an update. I'm having trouble working on a swimming pool. What do you guys suggest I can do to get the pool looking right? I also edited a lot of windows on the buildings so they're not the same on every building. I added a few more people, and I added some more sidewalks and added some details to those sidewalks as well.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 13 June 2010 at 8:13pm
	The light blue line on the pool should be the top highlight not where you have it.
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Momotaro Seaman Joined: 13 June 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 15 June 2010 at 5:59am
	The light lines on the edges of buildings should b darker. It's pretty good, but it needs more action. Maybe a helicopter, some cars, an explosion, etc. etc.
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JWM Seaman Joined: 01 April 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 18 June 2010 at 11:56am
	*Originally posted by jalonso* The light blue line on the pool should be the top highlight not where you have it. *Originally posted by Momotaro* The light lines on the edges of buildings should b darker. It's pretty good, but it needs more action. Maybe a helicopter, some cars, an explosion, etc. etc. Thanks for the feedback, guys. The lines being darker, did you mean the darkest, or just a slightly darker shade? Thanks Edited by jwmollman - 18 June 2010 at 11:56am
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Momotaro Seaman Joined: 13 June 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 19 June 2010 at 12:39pm
	The top edges should stay the same, but the edge facing the viewer should be slightly darker.
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