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    Posted: 28 July 2013 at 7:02pm


Green colors by jamon
Reff by slym

Tips?
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2013 at 7:31pm


EDIT 2 - palette by slym
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:15pm

EDIT 3 - I packed some things
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Quote Blainertyr Replybullet Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:48pm
I just would like to say this is beautiful. Continue the AMAZING WORK. You might want to change the ground, the gray, a little bit more to match with the backround.

EDIT: I'm not very good, if you enjoy your portrait the way it is, don't listen to me.I'm not to speak considering I'm new to this forum.

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Quote RileyFiery Replybullet Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:53pm
I think a texture of some sort on the back of the tree would help a lot.
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Quote shampoop Replybullet Posted: 05 August 2013 at 1:01pm
I would lower your saturation values of the brown you use for your bark. 
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2013 at 4:51pm
Thanks for the tips.

I made a small edit changing the colors to reduce saturation



I did not like it, I'm looking for a new palette ...

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Quote Oriena Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2013 at 5:09pm
I think I actually like the first picture's color theme a lot.
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Quote Muxaun Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2013 at 5:17pm
At first glance it reads like blades stuck in ground - not like forest.

Initial color scheme was better. Distant tree trunks should blend into blue sky.
Also distant trees shall look smaller then foreground ones. Therefore the foliage of distant trees shall be lower (currently it looks like distant trees are becoming higher and higher with distance).

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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2013 at 5:30pm


-- New update --
with Sohei palette
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:12pm
Any tips?

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New update


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Quote Neonman Replybullet Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:59am
Hi!
        Looking good underBoss! :) Has a charming feel to it :) What I would suggest is to have some branches coming off the trunks to break up to lines and enhance the feeling of depth to your level artwork.

I've done a quick overdraw to show you what I mean.

All the best!

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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:03pm
@Neonman Many thanks for the edit, I will definitely use this edit. Thank you very much!
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Quote Neonman Replybullet Posted: 05 September 2013 at 7:47am
You're welcome! Keep up the awesome work! :D
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2013 at 6:48pm

Little edit...
I add rocks and refined, Neonman. Thank u
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 07 October 2013 at 3:07pm


Finish!!!
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