well, it's a bit hard to explain, but to answer yor first point, no, its finished. about the explanation, how can i say it? it's not like a visor or something, those are just... eyes. that's all. as if they were the eye hollows, like in a skull,to provide an example. and the hair, wel, he is suposed to be a robot, so i won't call that hair, it's more like a helmet or part of an spiky exoskull. buth in both cases, i Agree with you about the highlights.
This still looks like a WIP. I actually thought the black eyes was a blank space at first, looking at your gallery showed me that I was wrong. But I think that, if it's supposed to be a visor, then it needs some sort of reflections or highlights on the surface. There should also be some highlights on the hair, it looks kind of flat as it is. Other than that though, it looks good. I'd just fix it up a bit and resubmit it.
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That is brilliant.