he looks like one of these clay figures made of diferent colors.

add more mountains then, using the same 5 colours or add clouds, theres ALWAYS something u can add..:P i like the shading overall..good job

I mostly dithered him because the colors don't work well together its hard to find better colors because none of them are really that distinct, I have no Ideas of what I could add to make the left side interesting and keep the 5 colors

The anatomy is much improved  I feel he might be over-dithered for the size, and the balance of the piece is off, maybe add something on the left side of the image.  I made an edit of the original anatomy btw, though it is no longer as useful.

no that was exactly why I made the anatomy off, i know rough proportions and rough anatomy

EDIT: but seeing as how you wont let it go I will edit

It's not that the anatomy isn't exact, it's that it's way off.  I doubt this is because you were trying to portray a non-human figure, so much as lacking a strong understanding of anatomy.  The torso is entirely too long, the shoulders are too wide, and the arms are too short and stocky.

No, it HAS to be 120x240, no transparency. 

well is he actually human? no, so he shouldn't have the exact anatomy of a human I agree about the torso, also this is within the size limits don't worry, none of the borders even going over 100

Anatomy seems off. His hands should surpass his belly button instead of being lined up to it. His elbows should be lined up to his belly button instead. Everything below his waist seems off to be honest. You may want to put this into the forums instead to get some feedback on how to fix this up a bit. This way, you can have a better turn out. Good luck with fixing it and good luck in the challenge. :)

It has to be 120x240.  His torso seems to be abnormal, I suggest shortening a bit, and taking this to the forums.