This is nice. The girl needs some more hips! Use of illustrative style black outlines is cool. The way you shade in the forms is interesting, the sword metal is very well done.

Whole thing is so unpolished/rough. Right arms different lengths. Feet misshapen. The snow boots and spiked gloves in no way match the bikini, making the outfit look like boots, gloves and underwear. Sword's blade vent isn't centered, it's hilt handguards aren't symmetrical. Skin shading should be smoother, not jaggy.

I really love this kinda style, makes me think of oldschool games~ Great job, especially loving her face, midsection and sword~

Nice. I love the sword, and the varying line width is something I don't see much in pixel art, it looks great.

I don't claim to be anything close to an expert on anatomy, but her legs seem a bit thick and long. It might be the boots throwing me off on the thickness, but either way they do seem a bit long. Am I crazy? Edit: Actually, I think I'm just crazy.

Stitchy: Yeah, I know what you mean about that leg angle.  I went over it a couple times.  Thanks for the edit, appreciate it.

All:  Great feedback, thanks.

Great piece! Usually I'm not a fan of this kind of outlines, but I fell in love with the face immediately.

Just some nitpicking: Hands are a bit odd. Especially the swordholding one. The sword doesn't seem to be in the right position. Also I cant' really figure out what's happening in the wrist area. Her abdomen under the boobs looks also a bit empty. Maybe some harder shadows under the breast or a bit more descending breasts would do the trick. Oh and there are some colors you could have saved.

But anyway, an awsome drawing. And damn, a really sweet face.