Gil is right on this one. The smoke just doesnt match the explosion size. I'm in the military, I see my fair share of explosions, and the smoke lacks its natural gracefulness. It's to rough and quick toward the end of the animation. It should be strong and powerful but billow upward slowly, not raise like a curtain on a stage. Great work though, this is awsome. Link to billowing smoke clouds - http://www.theage.com.au/ffximage/2006/10/07/knVOLCANO_narrowweb__300x403,0.jpg
You need to work on the smoke part a lot, but the flow is excellent. I think you're animating the smoke as if it were a small explosion, you need thick pillowy smoke balls instead. This feels more like grind stones being kicked up in the air...
You don't even have to look at the name to see at the preview that you made it... Very recognizeable style Also a nice explosion, but somehow the animation doesn't seem smooth... Maybe not enough frames in the last (smoke) section?
Yeah I just gave all of the frames the same timing. Ill modify the whole timing right now and see if its better (Ill add a notice in the description when its done) thanks for the comments!
(its changed now. Its a lot better like this, indeed)
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Just amazing...