Less outlines + more shadows, please!
Enormous potential here, don't let it down!
As good as the other one, the colours definitely remind me of European comics (bandes dessinées), very 80s.
Je me disais bien que ça me faisait penser à des BDs. Même pas le temps de me lever pour aller chercher dans ma bibliothèque, ton commentaire est apparu.
Very nice atmosphere.
240x320 ?! You did it by tilting the monitor sideways 
Nice illustration, very much like some european comics.
This is really well done, loving the dither on the sky
Dream Dealer, Dream Dealer, sittin' in yo pleatha chair, staring at me, staring at me as I attempt to repair the life I once knew but was rejected from, for so little I knew, and all along it was you . . . you, the one that sells back the dreams of those torn in two. Sell me a dream, Dream Dealer, lest I launch a nuclear bomb at you.
Really nice. Maybe too much outlining is used but overall a great looking piece.
Great work!