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Amazing... Much better than the one you previously submitted in to the BBS at eclipse. So paradise is going to be iso.. I like it.
Very good critique Zi-Double. That was very helpful. I'm not sure about the colors that you picked, however, I do see what you mean by reducing color count, and colors with less contrast. Although, the brighter colors did fit with the style of this game. I will work on the colors more. The bride you made was a huge improvement, so I will be changing my bridge shortly. Once again, thanks for the critique. Its much appreciated.
Ok make just fast example for what I talk:
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff224/zi_double/preview6_zi.gif
also colours are without contrast, that is why all brown colours look very similar. also you can reduce them to 2/3 of all current colours.
also in future try to clear details - like stake and all small elements they carry clear and nice vision.
I don't know idea for the game, but don't forgot that dark places which are in shadows always will contribute for nice and fun vision :)
It looks very nice. Especially the grass. Animation on the water would be a nice final touch.
Awesome. I would really like to play a game with this kind of graphics. Great job, I love the colors.
I was trying to make them fit with the rest of the tiles. So enlarging was one of my little options. This game will be in Full Screen resolution, so the rest of the tiles will be rather large. The trees are a little bit smaller than what they will probably be like when the game is computed.
look at good :)
I'll suggest you to make all details in approximately same size. Look at your boards - they are 3 times wide from the trees, also distance between them is very big too. For me boards look a bit like made with the plasticine.
On the front page, you mean? Works that have a preview image above a certain file size aren't shown there.
Nice work on this :)
Hey slym! Its ace from eclipse. Paradise online seems to coming along great, really sweet tiles you have there.